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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Kyouzou
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5,061 posts
Jester

Short conversations
Hushed whispers

Hiding in the darkness
Reveling in hidden knowledge

A secret told
Many secrets revealed


A river of blood, blackest of nights...

waluigi
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Shepherd

a river of blood, blackest of nights
the war of all wars, the worst of the fights
so many lie dead along the bare banks
surrounded by nothing but carcass of tanks

My lord! My God! how could you let this be!
Leave this ghastly site for me to see!
How could you take all I know from me!
Why must so many die, taken and no longer free!

From a distance there's cheering from the enemy front
they raise up there flag; they've won in there hunt
But still I sit in my comrades' ruins, no sign of light,
Just a river of blood, darkest of nights.


tongues are ablaze

CommanderDude7
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Nomad

Sending shivers down my back as he held me so
I wondered how far he wanted to go
And then with a flash of intuition
I drop kicked him into the kitchen
There with garlic and stake
I put an end to this vampire fake

I cant believe you just did that

IcyIndia
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1,344 posts
Nomad

I can't believe you just did that.
I can't believe you.
Why did you go and do that?
When all I could ever do was fall apart?

Breaking into a million pieces,
Slicing through your eyes,
Forgetting just to breathe.

Though you often know when to stop,
When to let go of the wing of the airplane,
And just drop.

Never look me in the eyes,
Never see who I am.
Always remember who I was,
But don't forget, I am no more than--

Bury me deep underground,
Let the worms swallow me whole.
Bury me in your guilt, and
Never let me forget what I've done.


A fiery bolt of electricity

MoonFairy
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3,386 posts
Shepherd

A fiery bolt of electricity,
Just killed my Direct TV.
No more Cartoon Network.
Or Spongebob galore,
I just get to sit down
And be completely bored.
Now I have no excuse,
To not do my work.
No more homework,
I'm allowed to shirk.
Shooting me now,
Would be a gracious present.
Just do it quick,
And take me out of this torment.
I will miss you
Direct TV
Darn that bolt
Of fiery electricy...
____

f-f-f-faaaiiiilll.

True story though... T_T

Bottoms up!

Kyouzou
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Jester

You left me with...
Everything, but you took yourself

Now what am I gonna do without you
Oh tell me what am I gonna do without you

You left me with everything
But you took the most important thing

I only have one question for you...

Why?


Precipice of hatred, Edge of darkness

crazyrussian97
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256 posts
Shepherd

Precipice of hatred, Edge of darkness.
My version of justice is brutal and lightless.
Long arms of the law cannot kill every killer,
So at times it is I that must be the blood spiller.

The system of courts is corrupted and weak
So that victims cannot find the justice they seek.
The judges are frauds, the lawyers are liars.
For money they'll let the whole world drown in fires.

Justice, abandoned, is cared by my hand.
I'm the only one left to take the right stand.
The killers they free will be dead overnight
By my blade or my gun, any weapon in sight.

Vigilante, they call me, the weaklings and fools.
Sentimental for evil, they're the media's tools.
They'll bleed for the killers but not for the dead,
Deriding the victims for grieving instead.

I find all of those who dance free from the law
And dispense my dark justice as brutal and raw.
Blood repays blood, I care not for their plea.
Tears didn't stop them, why would they stop me?

I care not for the "sorry" or "mentally ill".
Bull crap lies do not stop me from making the kill.
He killed mothers and children yet still can walk free?
Who the hell brought to law this insanity?

I care not for their hatred or threats of my death;
Avenging the slaughtered gives me purpose and breath.
If I live and let live then I die and let die;
No mercy for the merciless, in dirt they shall lie.

As the flames caress my face

wideloadbo10
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Nomad

As the flames caress my face
As the the burning stops the race
As the my heart stops in its tracks
As I die do not harass

The big monkey sores through the sky

SheWhoMustNotBeNamed
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SheWhoMustNotBeNamed
185 posts
Nomad

Don't even bother reading this.

The big monkey soars across the sky
passing the swaying willow bathed in moonlight
he knows that soon he will have to die
but all he wants is to fly.

The archers below look up at him
reach for their wooden bows, notch their steel arrows
in the moonlight, their faces look grim
but still through the clouds he swims.

Commoners notice, cry out in fear
for BigMonkey was their savior, they loved him
but the archers killed the their monkey dear
with him fell a single tear.

Man that was bad.

A sea of contempt

vontje
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Nomad

Time heals all wounds,
at least that's what they say.
But why is it that i am,
still feeling this way.

Still crying every day,
Is this all i will be,
I want to be happy,
i want to be just me.

Even though it was so long ago,
not days, not weeks but years
i still feel broken inside
drowning in my tears.

People let me alone,
afraid of who i have become
i wished i could leave it behind
i wished i was just someone,
except for me.

What can i do is all,
that i want to know
maybe it's just fate,
that tells me i should go.

Maybe i should step out of this
i hope there is a next life
where i can become happy
a loved and cared for wife.

I think this is where it ends
i will let go all my fears,
time doesn't heal my wounds,
it just waited for me to drown,
drown in my own tears.

What i've become

vontje
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vontje
866 posts
Nomad

i want to be just me.


Sorry for dp, but this is supposed to be, i just don't want to be me.
jezz
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Farmer

What I've become,
What I've turned into,
Isn't actually me,
Not the me that I knew.

Below the skin,
There's selfishness,
And a self-absorbing,
Repulsiveness.

A creature,
Lying, prying free,
Empty little wretch,
Keeps an eye on me.

It feeds on,
Insecurities,
A vector of,
Damaging disease.

Caged up,
My sorry soul,
Ashamedly, slowly,
Losing all control.

It's turned,
So many against me,
Ones I love,
Who just can't see;

Deep inside,
Weeping with regret,
My forgotten self,
That I mustn't forget.

The sky is brown

crazyrussian97
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256 posts
Shepherd

The sky is brown
And yields no light.
Horizon's crown
Is not in sight.

In dark I lay.
In dark I "live".
No light of day
Has joy to give.

The pressure, strong,
Stifles my breath.
Their grief was wrong;
I'm free from Death.

Their foolish lapse
Left me to rot.
And soon, perhaps,
I'll be forgot.

See if you can figure out this one's dark implication. Oh and the next line:

Wednesday is the child of woe

CommanderDude7
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Nomad

Wednesday is the child of woe
Is what some say
I say Wednesday is the child of joy
While Monday is the father of woe
Saturday indeed is a parent of happiness
While Tuesday is a child of grouches
Stallions bound across the lawn

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

Stallions bound across the lawn
Omg I just ate a prawn
Look at that, a little fawn
I think we all know a guy named Sean.
____

No one else was going for it. Might as well add something senseless.

This will be a happy poem

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