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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Kyouzou
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Jester

New line:

Sally forth!

jkl3848
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Peasant

Sally forth!
Who is she?
I have no clue.
Who cares?

The skyline glitters.

kevin8ye
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Nomad

The skyline glitters
i hear and think and think
but when i go
there is no glow
from the rumored skyline

kevin8ye
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Nomad

ooops, new line:

Over the woods and through the river


lol

jkl3848
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Peasant

Over the woods and through the river,
Wait, you can't go through the river.
You would get all wet!

The knight steps bravely,

light_chaser
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Peasant

The knight steps bravely,
knowing not what face he,
he slays monsters stupendously,
the knight stepped bravely.

the epic armorgames

gnosiphile
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Nomad

The epic armorgames dwarf the competitors,
awash in the size of the gatherings of settlers.
As winners and losers are ticked off in light,
some perish, some buckle, and others still fight.

When fletchers are busy

jkl3848
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When fletchers are busy,
they don't work as hard.
They do their first work,
and work till the dawn.

The snow falls,

light_chaser
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The snow falls,
without getting hurt,
and they dont live in a yurt,
this is now random,
I dont have a fandom,
falls,hurt,yurt,random, and fandom.

firetail_madness is weird.

jkl3848
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fiertail_madness is weird.
That's what light_chaser says.
I don't know what to think.
But I know I like PEZ.

The bird flies in the breeze.

gnosiphile
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Nomad

The bird flies in the breeze.
It carries a pointed delivery.
It's sent with too much ease
by the experts in national livery.
The hope that's held off extinction,
that cooler heads will prevail,
continues without the distinction
of being unable to fail.
Unless we halt division,
and learn to drop our walls,
this Babel we've envisioned
may find its rigored fall.
So understand a stranger,
and know that you're one too.
It alleviates the danger
of thinking the untrue.


The original post in this thread called for poems rather than just verses, so I went for something a touch longer.

In fevered dreams barely recalled

jkl3848
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In fevered dream, barely recalled,
I sit and eat, although I'm appalled.
The forest is dark. I'm all alone.
No life, just moss and stone.
I awake at night, in a cold sweat,
and think about the time, true love I met.

I'm alone.

kevin8ye
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Nomad

I'm alone
is what you think
when you're alone
when you watch
Home Alone 3

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RAWR

jkl3848
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RAWR. WHAT DOES IT MEAN?
I COULD BE THE SOUND OF A DINOSAUR.
IT COULD BE AN ACRONYM.
WHO KNOWS WHAT 'RAWR' MEANS?

Jkl3848 is awesome because,

kevin8ye
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Jkl3848 is awesome because,
is what Jkl3848 says
but in truth,
he isnt
he actually sucks.
alot.


(no offense Jkl3848
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ummmmm

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