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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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jkl3848
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None taken.
Ummmmm.
It is a sound.
kevin8ye,
must be think.
Cause he said,
'ummmmm'.

Poetry's Fun!

light_chaser
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Poetry's fun!
It makes me run!
some people are bad,
but it's just a fad.

A dying rose,

jkl3848
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A dying rose,
wilts in the desert.
It's end, it knows.
It's almost the end.
But it hopes for rain.
It's message for rain it sends.

First line poety.

light_chaser
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First line poetry.
poetry shmoetry.
poetry's weird.
Kind of like a beard...

epic is overused

I am experiencing MAJOR glitching..

kevin8ye
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epic is overused
cause everyday
i hear some say
"epic is overused"

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[b]The last line of poetry

EnterOrion
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The last line of poetry
To take the last symmetry,
The soul of the poet pour onto the page,
With the smell of incense and sage.

To cover the lines I put forth my final breath,
To revel as my genius sees death,
The words are stolen, faded to gray,
Until I find the words another day,
In another way,
My final lines the last that I say.

A muted poet is one who paints the world,
Another day has slowly unfurled,
Now my last piece falls into place,
Seeing through another haze,
In another maze,
As I exit the tunnel of the phase.

World of sanctuary

gnosiphile
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World of sanctuary (appetizing deception),
is meant to mask the fears of an unfettered recollection,
is simply an illusion keeping evils at bay,
as though the dangers that they stem from ever really go away.
When resting on our laurels means we're dying in the end,
and watching out for enemies means never knowing friends,
it's time to kill the niceties of social lubrication
to protect the fading ember underlying motivation.
Utopia may be a place to camp out with the cubs,
but if there's no resistance there can be no growing up,
so I'll take mother Earth with all her daily tragedies,
since without them there's no hope for any long term progeny.

Whispering madness

jkl3848
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Whispering madness.
Or filled with sadness.
What is your feelings?
You know the things.

The squirrel sits and chatters.

Parsat
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The squirrel sits and chatters
Of rodently matters.
Another squirrel sits
Showing rodently manners.

So late and yet so very bright

light_chaser
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So late and yet so very bright,
It was a very strange night,
there had just been a bad fight,
and there was no might.

so late yet so very bright,
the light spotted a fight,
the light was from the police,
this poem was thought peice-by-piece.

Tinfoil is shiny

kevin8ye
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Tinfoil is shiny
bronze is shiny
silver is shiny
diamond is shiny
GOLD IS PRECIOUS!!!!!
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im bored

FALLEN950
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I'm bored
I have nothing to do
I waste all my time
Doing nothing
Because I'm bored
And have nothing to do


That special place within

jkl3848
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That special place within,
I have kept in a tin.
Sitting on a shelf,
My life isn't a sin.

Keep the trees alive

light_chaser
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keep the trees alive,
don't use your knives,
they don't have lives,
like your game.

my life is orange (>)

Bladerunner679
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my life is orange


...guess I'll have to slant rhyme it.

My life is orange
but only a tinge
I'd like to keep it so
to prevent any binge.

(that was much harder than I first anticipated)

The power of time
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