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SirNoobalot
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since we got evicted from the other, a separate thread >.>

some other ideas i wanted to make clear:

different alien races ( robot races especially)
jobs?
Factions for alien races
Stats?
A good name
Linear/nonlinear?

just putting those out there to give guidance.

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Hypermnestra
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Now we need a main SlaveR Race.

Hm.
*goes to other room*
*grabs clipboard & pencil*
*chews eraser*
I haz it!
*starts scribbling*
*hands clipboard to Sirnoob*

Race Name: Odylann(O-dil-on)
Summary: The Odylann are a booming but war-torn race. They are ambitious and are growing in size and power rapidly, their technology is constantly on the rise, and they are catching up to other races after being devastated. And part of being powerful is being, well, asshole-ish. They employ slavery to a maximum degree, treating their workers as dirt, however it is working for them. Many of them run large businesses, most either shady or violent. Some have attempted to set a justice system in place but it failed; most of it is either corruption or ambition. The most powerful families feud even now, though instead of guns their weapons are now words.
History: They were originally an impoverished society, living in filth and decay. Crime was rampant and there were no laws or enforcers to prevent it. Originally, the Odylann were lucky if they themselves were slaves; most of them had to scrape out a living doing even less savory things. There were an abundance of power struggles and civil wars. Hundreds of thousands were killed. Most of them were either slaves or worked like one. Many worked in mines, digging for the slightest hint of coal, which was the race's only source of income. In contrast, a few of the lucky ones had been born into rich families that had remained neutral throughout the civil wars, or even won. They lived lushly and in decadence while the rest starved. It was a dark time that still leaves a mark on them. Even now they are violent and corrupt; however, this stems from only one thing, and that's ambition. Many of them dreamed to drag themselves out of the pit they were in, and one finally struck gold. An illegal fringe mining company was searching for nearby places where mining was good. Many coal mines had already been established in the area and the mining company was looking for one. So they set up a mine and sent their workers out to dig. One worker dug deeper than he was supposed to and discovered something in the magma; a precious, thus-unidentified metal. It was examined and found to be even harder than diamond, and flexible to boot. Immediately several industries started to dig deeper and found a thick layer of the stuff at the bottom of the planet's crust, everywhere. They had struck gold. It was dangerous to mine(if you weren't careful you could burn to death doing it) but it was a booming industry for body armor and whatnot. The Odylann became an extremely rich society, though still torn by violence. Now several companies and families vie for power while the slaves work, mining the precious metal for them.
Personality: Though, obviously, exceptions do exist, the average Odylann is industrious, jaded, ambitious, easily corrupted or tempted, and selfish.
Physical Description: Tall and muscular, with cracked black skin. Some have yellow eyes, some have red. Most have a short cropping of reddish, whitish, or yellowish hair growing from their head. Their eyes are like that of a cat's. Their teeth are almost all blunt and herbivorous, though some have a few sharp canines. Long, thin fingers.
Technology: Their technology is average, however they are especially good at mining and weaponry. It is quickly growing and should be advanced soon, though. Their only weak spot in technology is homes and societies; they focus less on creature comforts and more on simple, sweet success.
Personal Strengths: They are physically strong and resistant to both the heat and the cold.
Personal Weaknesses: Odylanns see in only black and white, no color, meaning they can easily be snuck up on. They have terrible eyesight and nearly nothing to compensate.
Society Strengths: Quickly growing, rich, and powerful.
Society Weaknesses: Corrupt and war-torn.

Howzat?
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I see you are new and ill give you a tip. Spell correctly post more than 7 words use good grammar and puncuation and dont double or for goodness sake triple post. Then you will fit right in. (check out the newcomers forum please)

SirNoobalot
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@ Martin:

please collect your thoughts tgether whenever you post on this forum.

@ wes:

not sure how 2 creators would work out??? canz give u credit though

@loco:
no favoiritism

Hypermnestra
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Spell correctly
use good grammar and puncuation

ROFLMFAOXYZ. Irony and hypocrisy at its most motherfucking hilarious, ladies and gentlemen.
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Race Name: Odylann(O-dil-on)
Summary: The Odylann are a booming but war-torn race. They are ambitious and are growing in size and power rapidly, their technology is constantly on the rise, and they are catching up to other races after being devastated. And part of being powerful is being, well, *******-ish. They employ slavery to a maximum degree, treating their workers as dirt, however it is working for them. Many of them run large businesses, most either shady or violent. Some have attempted to set a justice system in place but it failed; most of it is either corruption or ambition. The most powerful families feud even now, though instead of guns their weapons are now words.
History: They were originally an impoverished society, living in filth and decay. Crime was rampant and there were no laws or enforcers to prevent it. Originally, the Odylann were lucky if they themselves were slaves; most of them had to scrape out a living doing even less savory things. There were an abundance of power struggles and civil wars. Hundreds of thousands were killed. Most of them were either slaves or worked like one. Many worked in mines, digging for the slightest hint of coal, which was the race's only source of income. In contrast, a few of the lucky ones had been born into rich families that had remained neutral throughout the civil wars, or even won. They lived lushly and in decadence while the rest starved. It was a dark time that still leaves a mark on them. Even now they are violent and corrupt; however, this stems from only one thing, and that's ambition. Many of them dreamed to drag themselves out of the pit they were in, and one finally struck gold. An illegal fringe mining company was searching for nearby places where mining was good. Many coal mines had already been established in the area and the mining company was looking for one. So they set up a mine and sent their workers out to dig. One worker dug deeper than he was supposed to and discovered something in the magma; a precious, thus-unidentified metal. It was examined and found to be even harder than diamond, and flexible to boot. Immediately several industries started to dig deeper and found a thick layer of the stuff at the bottom of the planet's crust, everywhere. They had struck gold. It was dangerous to mine(if you weren't careful you could burn to death doing it) but it was a booming industry for body armor and whatnot. The Odylann became an extremely rich society, though still torn by violence. Now several companies and families vie for power while the slaves work, mining the precious metal for them.
Personality: Though, obviously, exceptions do exist, the average Odylann is industrious, jaded, ambitious, easily corrupted or tempted, and selfish.
Physical Description: Tall and muscular, with cracked black skin. Some have yellow eyes, some have red. Most have a short cropping of reddish, whitish, or yellowish hair growing from their head. Their eyes are like that of a cat's. Their teeth are almost all blunt and herbivorous, though some have a few sharp canines. Long, thin fingers.
Technology: Their technology is average, however they are especially good at mining and weaponry. It is quickly growing and should be advanced soon, though. Their only weak spot in technology is homes and societies; they focus less on creature comforts and more on simple, sweet success.
Personal Strengths: They are physically strong and resistant to both the heat and the cold.
Personal Weaknesses: Odylanns see in only black and white, no color, meaning they can easily be snuck up on. They have terrible eyesight and nearly nothing to compensate.
Society Strengths: Quickly growing, rich, and powerful.
Society Weaknesses: Corrupt and war-torn.


i couldn't ask for better =D
25wes25
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Hyper you type too much good job though!!! haha.

Hypermnestra
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i couldn't ask for better =D

All I can say is; you better give me credit times a billion dude.
SirNoobalot
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k assuming i don't leave for dinner or anthing should be done... 1-3 hours.

thnx every1 who contributed

25wes25
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NONONO thank you for makeing it.

SirNoobalot
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kk having a signup now... any suggestions for the char sheet tell meh.

Limit: 4 players, maybe 5

Name: ( pleaseee.. no names like ' Luke Skywalker' or ' Mace Windu'. can't think of a name, a handy thing called google saves the day. an d please alien name if you're not human pl0x)
Gender: ( M or F )
Age: ( optional, but remember this iz teh future and u aren't necessarily human XD )
Credits: 2,000
Race:
Faction: none
weapons: blaster pistol
Fleet Size: 1
Ship name: ( insert here)
Class: junker
Crew: 4
Hull Integrity: 100%
Shield Integrity: 0%
Weaponry: 2 dual ion blasters, 1 remote top ball-turret (laser), 1 remote rocket port
Armor: scrap metal
Armor integrity: 100%
Other ship effects: none
Allies: ( insert your race here)
Enemies: none
Bio: short pl0x >.>
Other: i fill this in ( personal notes for meh)

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Name: Michael Carter
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Credits: 2,000
Race: Human
Faction: None
weapons: blaster pistol
Fleet Size: 1
Ship name: The Talea Ora
Class: junker
Crew: 4
Hull Integrity: 100%
Shield Integrity: 0%
Weaponry: 2 dual ion blasters, 1 remote top ball-turret (laser), 1 remote rocket port
Armor: scrap metal
Armor integrity: 100%
Other ship effects: none
Allies: Humanity
Enemies: none
Bio: Was raised on Earth. Joined the army. Decided to be a ship's captain. Short 'nuff?
Other: i fill this in ( personal notes for meh)

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Name:
Gender: ( M or F )
Age: 31
Credits: 2,000
Race: Human
Faction: none
weapons: blaster pistol
Fleet Size: 1
Ship name: The red dawn
Class: junker
Crew: 4
Hull Integrity: 100%
Shield Integrity: 0%
Weaponry: 2 dual ion blasters, 1 remote top ball-turret (laser), 1 remote rocket port
Armor: scrap metal
Armor integrity: 100%
Other ship effects: none
Allies: Human
Enemies: none
Bio: was a colinist never been on earth fought in many wars
Other: is very stritegic, is very linyent on men/women of crew and puts lives first mission second

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Name: Robert Morrison
Gender: M
Age: 31
Credits: 2,000
Race: Human
Faction: none
weapons: blaster pistol
Fleet Size: 1
Ship name: The red dawn
Class: junker
Crew: 4
Hull Integrity: 100%
Shield Integrity: 0%
Weaponry: 2 dual ion blasters, 1 remote top ball-turret (laser), 1 remote rocket port
Armor: scrap metal
Armor integrity: 100%
Other ship effects: none
Allies: Human
Enemies: none
Bio: was a colinist never been on earth fought in many wars
Other: is very stritegic, is very linyent on men/women of crew and puts lives first mission second


sorry

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Name: Wesley
Gender: M
Age: 19
Credits: 2,000
Race: Human
Faction: none
weapons: blaster pistol
Fleet Size: 1
Ship name: The Punisher
Class: junker
Crew: 4
Hull Integrity: 100%
Shield Integrity: 0%
Weaponry: 2 dual ion blasters, 1 remote top ball-turret (laser), 1 remote rocket port
Armor: scrap metal
Armor integrity: 100%
Other ship effects:
Allies:
Enemies:
Bio: A boy who grew up on earth and has bought a junk and is ready to set out on a journey for supremicy!
Other:

that good?

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Name: Drachir the Vile
Gender: M
Age: 101
Credits: 2,000
Race: Odylann
Faction: none
weapons: blaster pistol
Fleet Size: 1
Ship name: (insert here)
Class: junker
Crew: 4
Hull Integrity: 100%
Shield Integrity: 0%
Weaponry: 2 dual ion blasters, 1 remote top ball-turret (laser), 1 remote rocket port
Armor: scrap metal
Armor integrity: 100%
Other ship effects: none
Allies: Zhykon
Enemies: none
Bio: woke up with the thought of leading a fleet, so he bought a junker and got started
Other: i fill this in ( personal notes for meh)

this right?

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