I decided I'd try and post some of my poems on here, since I liked the first line poem thread so much. I would really like some advice on how to improve. Thanks!
Yeah, it looks pretty doodled, I got a little confused with the physics in the first drawing with the chain (is it connected to the blade thingy?) and the blade-thingy, which looked like it went behind her back. Also, the blood is a little... Crooked. Must've been a strong wind... If you spent a little time with her, this could be really good. Not that it isn't
Yeah, the chain is attached to the end of the scythe. :P I should probably work on that. XD
****, you guys. I got 100 views overnight and no comments? Way to lurk. :P Anyways, Wolfeh will be uploaded tomorrow probably, if I can finally figure out how to draw feet. Then I'll be working on my poem for the poetry contest. For some reason I actually want to polish this one. And now I'm just speaking to an empty audience. XD
Not to sound strange, but that sounds, um, weird. Just a bit.
Did I comment on your pics of the reaper? If not, it looks a bit rushed. Everything felt, "loopy." It didn't feel help together. If you were to go back and edit it it'd look better in my book.
I like reaper. The drawings were a little confusing especially in the second one, but she still looks awesome.
And the reason in my opinion not a lot of people comment on your poetry is because most of them aren't great poets and logically when your not good at something you shouldn't give advice on it.
And the reason in my opinion not a lot of people comment on your poetry is because most of them aren't great poets and logically when your not good at something you shouldn't give advice on it.
So... You're saying that 'cause I comment on her poetry means that I'm great? Like, super-amazing-powerfully-masterful-in-every-way kinda way? Just kidding.
Ah, boy, I didn't even recognize this thread for a second. XD
So... You're saying that 'cause I comment on her poetry means that I'm great? Like, super-amazing-powerfully-masterful-in-every-way kinda way? Just kidding.
Lol.
What I meant was that most people that write here are usually writers and poets. Like Moon, you, Wolf....ect.
I think this is a record for consecutive non-me posts.
Thank you guys for all the compliments! And thanks for the critiques too. *coughpaarfamcough*
Did I comment on your pics of the reaper? If not, it looks a bit rushed. Everything felt, "loopy." It didn't feel help together. If you were to go back and edit it it'd look better in my book.
That's my main problem. When I sketch it out, I don't feel like trying to make it look any better. :/ Chronic laziness.
Blossom of the everlasting tree Waiting centuries to be free Rooted to the withered spot Fated to live and never rot. Its tangled roots reach ever deep And to the Earth they forever creep Holding the jagged rocks together It will last but till forever.
FLP stuff. Be patient Wolf, but also don't expect too much.
Now you may be wondering what the **** is wrong with this drawing.
The answer is: A lot of things. 1. The paper is wrinkled because I tried to bring it to school without a folder. 2. The shading is crappy because I can't shade 3. There's a random coyote/wolf/demon in the background because I wanted there to be something to help draw the attention away from the horrendous drawing. 4. Wolf has wolf feet because I can't draw people feet. 5. Wolf's proportions are wrong because I can't draw proportions. 6. Wolf has no face because I was afraid I'd mess that up too.
There's probably something I missed, but that's it for now.
Also, 10,000 views!!! Thanks to all of you that read my poems and things!