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TackyCrazyTNT
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I decided I'd try and post some of my poems on here, since I liked the first line poem thread so much. I would really like some advice on how to improve. Thanks!

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TackyCrazyTNT
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I was going to write about Resolutions, but I'm going to put that on my blog, so....
Instead, I've been requested, by Poison, jeol, Alexis, Oak and DV to write a little article on the wonders of tinychat. Tinychat is visited by a myriad of different users, including at least three mods (though rarely) and Knight. Everyone knows Knight, right?
I don't feel like disclosing the full link, but those who know the link will know what I"m talking about.

Tinychat is a wonderful place, filled with vidchats, and strangers who don't actually know each other embarrassing themselves on screen and generally having fun. Jeol and Alexis have actually only recently joined, having gone through hazing to be accepted. I'm joking, of course. Some examples:
Oak spun around in his chair for five minutes. I made him a trophy after he fell out of his chair.
Raptor dances galore.
Alexis spasmed, and we offered jeol to give her CPR.
Poison did questionable things on screen.

There's more, but it'll get boring if I list them all. Oak also wants me to write a story, sort of like the Adventures of AG, about the Adventures of Tinychat, but I'll save that for a later date.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Triple post!

This is Oak. All of the time.

http://i1179.photobucket.com/albums/x384/daisyhammer/oakspin.gif


Credit to Poison, he gave me permission, as well as Oak. I don't remember his actual username.

master565
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Lol, he was doing that for about 3 minutes straight. We should have him do this again sometime, except spinning the opposite direction of course.

Kyouzou
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I'm not sure whether that's incredibly fun or somewhat stupid... probably both.


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@Tacky

Just read "On Introductions" and while not "fall out of my chair funny" it was fairly entertaining in a somewhat self depreciating, nonchalant manner. Although I'm more interested in the "On Resolutions" post.
TackyCrazyTNT
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m not sure whether that's incredibly fun or somewhat stupid... probably both.


Definitely both.

Just read "On Introductions" and while not "fall out of my chair funny" it was fairly entertaining in a somewhat self depreciating, nonchalant manner. Although I'm more interested in the "On Resolutions" post.


Fairly entertaining isn't too bad. I'll work on it.
I wasn't really trying to go for the self-depreciating type of humor, though I did want it to sound somewhat nonchalant. So 1 out of 2, I guess.
Also, don't expect too much out of On Resolutions, because then it will not turn out good at all.
ProfessorOak
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Definitely both.


*cough*
TackyCrazyTNT
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*cough*


Don't deny it.

FLP stuffs.

I heard the bells on Christmas Day,
Singing with their solemn voices,
As I lay in my toasty bed,
Thinking of the past year's choices.

The bells' song brought to my mind,
All I'd wished for as a child,
When everything was possible,
My imagination running wild.

I think I'm going to sketch Tinychat people.
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There's more, but it'll get boring if I list them all. Oak also wants me to write a story, sort of like the Adventures of AG, about the Adventures of Tinychat, but I'll save that for a later date.


I remember Adventures of AG! lolifailedlol.

That would be... cool? AND TACKY YOU MISSED ME ON CAM LIKE ALL THIS MORNING.

Alexis and I had a grand time! xD
TackyCrazyTNT
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AND TACKY YOU MISSED ME ON CAM LIKE ALL THIS MORNING.


NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! D:
I was busy all morning.
Now I'm sad.

I remember Adventures of AG! lolifailedlol.


A few people asked me about that, actually.
"When are you going to do Adventures of AG?"
Me: "I have no idea."
RainbowGoGangster3
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wow tacky!! thats amazing! i especially like the war one. good job!! please become a poet! xD!

MoonFairy
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Feel free to do whatever you want with it, I never contributed that much anyways. x3

It's alright. You can also feel free to stay up and be deranged with us mwahahahahahahaa.

Don't be sad.

lolbecomeapoet. SHE IS A POET, YOU SILLY.

Kyouzou
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I believe he was referring to becoming a professional poet, i.e. she gets paid to write. (greatest job ever)

FLP is rather short, you didn't put forth much effort it seems.

TackyCrazyTNT
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wow tacky!! thats amazing! i especially like the war one. good job!! please become a poet! xD!


Thanks!

It's alright. You can also feel free to stay up and be deranged with us mwahahahahahahaa.


If I could stay up longer, I would...

FLP is rather short, you didn't put forth much effort it seems.


I actually made it pretty long, but the more I worked on it, the more I hated it so I scrapped most of it.

I appear to have forgotten how to write poetry, which is probably one of the most depressing things ever.
Kyouzou
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Take a look at the first line thread, usually helps me come up with something good, I love those moments when a poem just writes itself.

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You owe me a dragon!

I'll be patient.

So, you done yet?

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