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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Devoidless
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Um, yes it was! I was saying how great your haiku was!

To clarify, I just am not used to getting compliments on my works. Does nto help either I think all my writing is garbage.XD

But thanks for the kind words.
murasaki9
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To clarify, I just am not used to getting compliments on my works. Does nto help either I think all my writing is garbage.XD

But thanks for the kind words.


You are welcome! Hey, it's good to be complimented and it's sad if you don't get complimented often. It means that people just don't notice the good things that you do and the good in you. I believe there's some good to be found in everyone, including those who think there's no good in themselves. Your haikus aren't garbage. In fact, I have a lot of respect for all Moderators. Their writings are top notch in many cases.

All that said, I'm going to write my haiku for today.

Excited, surprised,
my dream's a reality.
I am winning now.
killersup10
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forgotten this time
all forever forgiven
never to hold truth

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Keep the spirits up
for they cannot haunt us now
they're already dead

killersup10
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Blacksmith

re-birthed upon time
yet once again let alone
forever over

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Keep this dead thing free.
It will find its way out then,
and go somewhere safe.

killersup10
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Blacksmith

full fields of envy
never seesing to even stop.
cover my body

MagicTree
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Nomad

The Problem

It's a dilemma.
A conundrum to ponder.
A problem, of sorts.

killersup10
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Blacksmith

death rolls over the land
haiku land is rolling now
slowly dying

MagicTree
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Nomad

This..this plague of death.
Haiku Land will be salvaged!
This wave will be stopped!

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I rally my troops.
My faithful soldiers march on.
The plague of death stops...

killersup10
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redemption follows
wounded, but reviving soon
haiku land will live

MagicTree
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Nomad

The celebrations,
Lasting all eternity.
Peace returns again.

murasaki9
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Let freedom ring loud.
Let the whole world know we're free!
This Haiku Land.

killersup10
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Blacksmith

problems might unsure
glasses are a little weird...
but sight is a must!


Got glasses the other day...

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