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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Riptizoid101
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Why fear the darkness?
It is what defines the light
It's equality

killersup10
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To trust once again
Should time be wasted on you
To devote the love

Riptizoid101
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You are wasted life
Like a desert near water
But a rainstorm comes

killersup10
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Love comes flooding back
Drowning your heart , no air here
Become ingulfed

murasaki9
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Abandoned, alone.
His sad reality looms.
Where will he go now?

murasaki9
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If there was ever a time to have this locked. That would have been it. With those final words. :O
Is that a good thing or a bad thing? Either way, I'm flattered.

hmm by reading some of your poems i can see i learnt it differently than you.
firsty... i learnt that you can put multiple haikus together and it is still a haiku ( like i did above) I am not saying you have to do it, but, 209+ times you have posted haikus in this thread and none were the way i wrote it.
I have posted haikus more than one at a time. It's just waay easier to just write one and be done with it. When I have more time I usually post two or more. But the whole purpose of this thread is to allow people to freelance haikus. Just have fun and take it outside of the traditional format, you know, nature and stuff. XD Anyway, glad to see you here. Hope you have fun! Post often!
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A Deceiving Look
I see a kind man
Yet his eyes are blood thirsty
A killer instinct

Fearless
So invincible
This man, unfazed by danger
No fear in his eyes

Cold Smile
A cold heart inside
Her body is frostbitten
Yet she is smiling

killersup10
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love will kill your mind
Hearts will bleed freely tonight
Old broken fool's house

SectoidMedic
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Peasant

Ah Gordon Freeman
such a violent person
but still so silent

Riptizoid101
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A brooding feeling
What is this uncertainty?
Now, destruction looms

killersup10
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Broken in half once
Forever forgotten twice
Forgiven them thrice


Ugrbshjfdbrauhdc. Love life

Riptizoid101
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A rock that still stands
Circle that's between diamonds
The name of this? Moon

murasaki9
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Let this be a sword.
And by my side will be Drake.
Now, us to battle.

We will stand and fight.
We will shout and we will win.
This is the epic war.

The story of the foe
who fell from glory in the
summer of eighteen.

murasaki9
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And now, the moment
we have all been waiting for.
Please welcome Haiku.

Riptizoid101
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A diluted force
Made weaker because of love
Not because of hate

She is always laughing
Not because it is funny
But it hides her pain

He took his last breath
His sword glimmers, still in hand
His heart: a soldier

He was always caged.
Steel bars separated him
Yet he'd done no wrong

A Father of time
A Mother of Earth's nature
Parents to us men

Why discriminate?
For color is a thin veil.
But under skin? Truth.

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Thank you for reading.
These haikus were hard to write.
Until next time, bye.

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