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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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The Stranger
Who knows what he knows?
He's too close to understand.
People don't know him.

rustygooga
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LOL haikus... my favorite type of poem... i remember i used to play an mmorpg called runescape and i only spoke in haikus XD
anyway here is one i just made up:
[b] THE MIGHTY DRAGON
High in the mountains,
A strong fearless dragon lives,
Heros defeated.

One more comes, oh wow!
Surely he can't beat the drake,
He must be stupid.

A slash and a punch,
Wow he has really done it!
He slayed the dragon...


hmm by reading some of your poems i can see i learnt it differently than you.
firsty... i learnt that you can put multiple haikus together and it is still a haiku ( like i did above) I am not saying you have to do it, but, 209+ times you have posted haikus in this thread and none were the way i wrote it.

secondly... i learnt that in every poem you have to put a comma at the end of the line and not a full stop.

please dont take those things as me saying your doing it all cause i dont mean that xd

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Baron

Fearless

Fearless, they all say.
I go out, and then they see.
Nothing. They were wrong.

Rapyion
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NO, NO, NO.

Terrified

I do not need this,
Yet, I contained this feeling,
devouring me.

I was almost dead,
I was inflicted with fear,
That was not needed.

I can't let this thread,
Go to the wastelands of dust,
I cannot let it.

killersup10
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Inside of a teen
There are so many worries
Floating in the head

Kiwi05
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Nomad

Her heart was broken
But more; Her soul was yearning
For something deadly

They say, she was sweet
They say she always looked fine
They say, they were wrong

Her life, her own death
All her pain and worries were gone
She took her last breath

She was wearing white
Patterned with a maroon red
Maroon red as blood

Her eyes looking to
The blue heavens in the sky
The pain, has passed by.

killersup10
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Not a bother here
Nor a single bother
To be anywhere

Rapyion
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Shepherd

Do Not Worry

Do not worry, kin,
I will accompany you,
Throughout this journey.

killersup10
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Yada yada ho
Much has exasperated
Total confusion

killersup10
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Haikus lived quickly
Forever continuing
More must be born soon

murasaki9
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Oh, wow. So surprised and proud of all you to see that Haiku Land is surviving, without me!! I can't say how happy it makes me! For Haiku Land to be a self sufficient, ever growing organism is beyond what I could have hoped for it during its inception.
Thank you all so much for your dedication to this thread! Love you all!

There would not be me,
There would not even be us,
Without you and I.

Hikakin_Fan
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Lord

School

I hate school badly
I get really bored and stuff
I only like math.

killersup10
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Do not worry one bit
Longer and longer breaks here
All is still very well

murasaki9
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Choose to be the one.
Choose to be the one who's free,
and you'll receive life.

killersup10
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This is the tribute
Facebook, Myspace, all a waste
Armor Games are here!

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