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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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dair5
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Respect. I give you.
Respect. I expect it back.
I've done something wrong?

acmed
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Nomad

Goosebumps on my arms.
I know that he is coming...
Oh crap! Chuck Norris!

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

dair5,acmed,knight_34,EmperorPalpatine, you guys are cool!
Thank you for keeping my thread alive with your haikus which
are a pleasure to read!

I'm so proud of us
together we will go far
secure victory

while the mountains rock
we'll dry up all the rivers
empty all cities

acmed
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Nomad

Earthquakes, Hurricanes.
Everything we had, now gone.
It's Armageddon.

dair5
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Shepherd

Does anyone else find my haikus a little, sad? Hm.

Confidence building,
Power rising deep within,
I'll do it this time.

I open my mouth,
I said what needs to be said.
Waiting for a yes.

acmed
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Nomad

Karma's sweet revenge.
Your needs first, her needs second.
Karma. Payback time.

dair5
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Shepherd

Come deep into me.
Spread me all around the world.
Don't leave me alone.



That was about a bee and a flower. It's from the flowers perspective. But it stil ends sad. > ARG!

murasaki9
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Yes, Dair5, your haiku's are sad. But I feel sad at the moment too, so...

I'm done explaining
my words keep falling so short
I'll be quiet now

That's how I feel. Nothing against you guys, it's something else.

murasaki9
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The tide has turned back
victory flows in my vein
no longer in bonds

acmed
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Nomad

Tears of Joy

Turn tears into joy.
Waterworks of happiness.
Crushed on the inside.

I've decided I wanted to titlize my haiku's now. Makes it look proper.

vinster132
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The AG forums
Are kind of getting boring
I am serious



It was better than it was before...

dair5
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Shepherd

I feel your warmth now.
We stand alone together.
Forever right now.

Yeah, rhis one ends happy.

I can trust no one.
Not the witch who lies to me,
Nor man, which does same.

This one not so much.

acmed
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Nomad

Hate

Is hate a feeling?
Or just something we all have
In certain people.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Pain is a river:
Only the resilient
Will outlast the flow.

murasaki9
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Feel

Do you feel my pain?
Do I understand you too?
Do we understand?

Do I need to fear?
The boundless energy flow
the heartless rage,words

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