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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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acmed
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I have never Tried to Hiaku but i will try and like it


Haikus are really fun! You'll like it! Or else...

Spirit

Spirit keeps you up.
Without spirit, we would be...
People without it...
vinster132
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Tackling, throwing,
running, kicking, catching,
Football...is now here

acmed
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Evil

Inside the depraved,
Lays hell fire ready to burn
Inside one's good soul.

vinster132
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Tackling, throwing,
running, kicking, catching,
Football...is now here

Oops just realized that "Running, kicking, catching" only has 6 syllables.

Running, kicking, and catching

There ya go.
dair5
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Memories of past.
The pain comes back much too fast.
I'll find ways to cope.

vinster132
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Kingdom Rush the best
Rangers shoot, Mage's magic
The barracks defense

Epic Armorgames
The forums are crystal clear
The games are perfect

acmed
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Help

Get some help for me.
As for I won't live much long...
Die, for the last time.

murasaki9
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Wow! You people really know how to give a thread a boooooost!!
Thank you all sincerely for the contributions. I like them all and if I was asked to judge, I'd ask if I could make as many 1st places as there were haikus!

First, for my loyal contributors:
You all give so much
creativity lives on
here in Haiku Land

Now, for Acmed:
Please don't die, my friend
hope is a greater thing now
help will save you, live

acmed
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I like the idea of interacting haiku's like you just did, I'll try it...

Heaven is right here.
On my side, and everyday.
Thank you, for the faith.

dair5
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I'm sorry I lie
I tell you that I'm ok
But I'm hurting now.

murasaki9
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Dair5
Please don't lie to me
If you're okay I'm happy
if not, I will pray

Thank you all! I love the way things are going here! I really feel as if Haiku Land is a developing nation that will live for a long time with the contributions of its loyal contributors.

dair5
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What? Oh no I didn't actually mean it. My haikus just come out sad. I'm fine. Really. I'll try to keep them happier.

The rain has stopped now.
The leftovers of lee have passed.
The worst is over.

murasaki9
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Thank you, Dair5. I know. Thank you though. This is really fun.

The leaves will soon turn
golden, red, yellow, fall down
autumn will be here

murasaki9
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Sorry. Have to DB.

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, You know
that what some donâµt know, we do
albeit, they will.

Snow
Falling, falling down
white drops of pure beauty
teach us to love.

acmed
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You know this thread has really helped me throughout the course of the Haiku Contest. Great inspirations, helpful comments, and so much practice! Thank you murasaki! Here's one I recently posted in the Haiku Contest:


Sunrise, by myself.
A bench for two, only me.
Alone til' sunset...

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