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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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dair5
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Shepherd

I wanna go back to my own haiku topics now...


Cool. Ima still base mine off of your if you don't mind.

Drive

I'd go for a drive.
We would go around the world.
Together at last.
EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

I wanna go back to my own haiku topics now...

Using words from the above user's was never a requirement or anything. Just a way to get some ideas. Anyone can post any haiku they want to, but if they can't find a general focus, selecting a single expandable word helps. Since we're all pretty good at haiku'ing, some really good words were used and were expanded well.

Go
Traveling onward,
I continue my journey
Of the unexplored.
acmed
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Nomad

Good. Moving on...

Blinded

Beautiful sunlight.
My eyes can't bare the given.
I'm in complete shock.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Light
Help me on my way
light up my path, make it bright
then I'll start to see

acmed
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Nomad

Invisible

Stepped on and betrayed.
I'm unseen and unwanted.
Like anyone cares...

dair5
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Shepherd

Care

Do you care for me?
Or would you toss me away?
Just love me today.

acmed
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Nomad

Freedom

Escaped. Free to breath.
Free to love, free to be loved.
I'm free. Free at last.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

I'll be there for you:
My shoulder is for your tears,
When you need to cry.

acmed
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Nomad

Gentle Touch

A soft sense of love,
Relaxing, now drifting off.
Touched. Inside and out.

dair5
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Shepherd

I love your soft skin.
I can't die with another.
Let's touch each other. (It is really not meant that way. Negative people.)

acmed
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Nomad

Hell's Gates

Greeted with a burn.
Not the place for me. No one.
Rise upon this land.

dair5
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Shepherd

Burn

My heart is burning.
Not from love, but from scolding.
Rejection doth sting.

acmed
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Nomad

Colors

A shining rainbow.
Colored lands of spacious sky.
And never ware out.

dair5
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Shepherd

Make it through

Shining through the dark.
Never weres, and never bes.
And they're still pushed down.

acmed
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Nomad

Bridge

Steps to new journeys.
The other side holds great hope.
Let's make it across.

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