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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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dair5
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Acmed

Acmed, what's up man?
You doing this on purpose?
Or coincidence?

dair5
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Shepherd

JK

JK, honstly,
please continue your haikus.
They are very good.

acmed
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Nomad

Thanks

A warm feeling soothes.
A thank you from you to me,
Tingles inside me.

hazanator
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Nomad

this comes from a book
[b]it left us in spring
to a place far far away
winter in my heart

knight_34
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Farmer

Cop at the Door

Tiding's harbinger:
a policeman at the door.
Costume party.

acmed
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Nomad

Trapped

A prison in heart,
Never to escape again.
And die all alone.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Let us leave this place
let us run away and hide
The moon will see us

knight_34
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Farmer

Man's morality,
is a helium balloon.
It rises then.. pops.

acmed
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Nomad

Realized

The pain gives me time
To think about my future.
And if you're in it.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Bad luck is like rain
And we are the ground below:
It falls where it falls.

dair5
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Shepherd

Depressed

I can't keep focus.
And I'm too stressed to relax.
Too sad to feel joy.

knight_34
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Farmer

Ice Cream

It pools on the ground,
the assailant looms above.
A little girl cries.

acmed
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Nomad

Friend

Someone to care for.
A buddy and a mentor,
Friendship forever.

knight_34
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Farmer

Read below

A wise sage once said,
productivity is lost
by reading haiku.

acmed
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Nomad

Target

Aimed for my dear soul.
Waiting to feel the great pain,
Like you would have cared.

No Worries

Let's not make it bad.
Don't forget the memories,
Now make it better.

The second one was a big inspiration to me from Hey Jude by the Beatles. It says so much.

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