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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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What, you don't trust us? :P

Not it. I just didn't think that everyone would do this. I didn't think people even cared about this thread. I guess I was way wrong. In retrospect, this is when it feels good to be dead wrong.

I'm longing for you
please come back and stay with me
do not go away

I cannot bear it
when you leave I die inside
to see you go on

you have to stay now
I won't let you leave again
what promise do you
dair5
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I bring myself near,
And I hold your body dear.
Thank God my loves here.

murasaki9
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This the end for me
I won't see you anymore
let us part in peace

murasaki9
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Boldly, it points up
slowly, it climbs out, tall, proud
its small green buds yawn


I submitted this into the Haiku Contest. I noticed that I placed 3rd place in the last one. I must not be that bad!

acmed
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Hi Murasaki!
We kept up your Haiku Land...
Oh yeah, you're welcome...

Where have you been lately?

Koru7
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the air is freezing
leaves crunch beneath my cold feet
winter is coming!

acmed
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Frozen raining falls.
The temperature drops down low...
And spirit boosts up.

Somewhat49
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cold, dry air is good
snowballs made for lots of fun
everyone enjoys

acmed
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Don't trust anyone.
Now everything is a scam...
Give me your wallet!

Somewhat49
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Wallet is empty
have fun with empty leather
have a nice day too!

tiniesthawk
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A two-part Haiku:

The Littoral
Azure sea-waves ebb,
revealing glist'ning warm sand
that welcomes my touch.

I sink my feet in,
feeling the welcoming warmth
that envelops them.

EmperorPalpatine
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Shelter awaits me,
Salvation from the torrent,
Safety from the storm.

Somewhat49
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But I was too late,
pushing and pulling me down
will I be rescued?

dair5
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Red flashes by me.
Spinning blades give me hope, but...
I see the red's mine.

acmed
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Blue skies above me.
The gentle water below.
Surrounded by love.

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