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murasaki9
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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

As the long road winds,
I realized what I've done.
Regrets slowed me down.

dair5
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Shepherd

Choice A

The highway of life.
Has long since been abandoned.
Now we wait for SPLAT!

Choice B

Memories of pain.
I've forgotten long ago.
Don't bring up this road.

Psh, its not like I made these two haiku and can't decide between the two or anything. What? I definitely know which one is better, and which is deeper and all that. I know if I should make another one all together. Huh? I don't need your advice! And its not like I'm possibly posting one of these in the haikus contest. Jeez! Get off my back!

acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

I can't give input since I'm judge... B....

The liquids of life,
Shower down on my dark soul.
Happiness at last.

acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

I won't choose for you, because I'm participating... *cough*b*cough*


Your so annoying! GAWD! JEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ!

Brother or sister.
Always loved by family...
Except for jeol...
dair5
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Shepherd

Thanks for the imput.
Also, I've decided that,
I'll make big poems.

Is poems one syllable or two?

acmed
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Nomad

Is poems one syllable or two?


2. Sheesh...

A big long journey.
Wandered to a different path.
What shall I do now?
dair5
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dair5
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Shepherd

Continue your path.
Less you stray away from her.
Lost in the forest.

Whoo! Symbolism FTW! Personification! Those are the only kind of poems I know how to write!

acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

Lost and never found.
Never see your face again.
Think you all the time.

EmperorPalpatine
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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

The quest is over;
Years of searching have paid off,
I have found myself.

acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

What was deep inside,
Is standing in front of me.
Shining like a sun.

acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

GAWD! SHADDUP! JEEEEEEEeEEEZ!


DON'T TELL ME TO SHADDUP! YOU SHADDUP! JEEEEEEEEEEEZ!

Now I am confused.
I thought jeol was a girl....
Still so annoying...

JEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ!
MagicTree
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MagicTree
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Nomad

You've done it again!
How many times have I complained?!
Don't eat my phone, Dan!

I WILL JUST SHUT UP! YOU STOP.

JimmyDimples
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JimmyDimples
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Blacksmith

EV'RYONE SHUT UP.
The flame wars were cute at first
But now just annoy.

acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

As much as we fight.
We always stick together...
And I love you bro!

JEEEEEEEeEEEZ! JUST SHADDUP! JEEZ!


SHADDUP! SHADDUP! SHADDUP! SHADDUP! SHADDUP! SHADDUP! SHADDUP! JJJJJEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ!
dudeguy45
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Peasant

I walk in on this
I am struck with knowing not
what is going on

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