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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

There's not need for this
I see him staring at me
I wish he'd just speak

I feel so tensed out
if it's bad news, spit it out
I can handle it

But he will not speak
because I am so afraid
he thinks I will die

It is not that bad
I wish he would speak to me
I am not afraid

Finally, he speaks
I see his expression pale
I'm taking it well

He loses, I lose
We're both in this together
So he trusts, I trust

KingLemon
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KingLemon
600 posts
Nomad

~A Flameless Love~
Smoldering ashes.
Remnants of a burning flame.
Only needing fuel.

MagicTree
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MagicTree
749 posts
Nomad

Red, Orange, Yellow,
Colours of the rainbow,
Green, Blue, Purple, yeah!

I know one is missing.

Riptizoid101
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Riptizoid101
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Farmer

My First Haiku....

I am new in this
But I will give it a try
Oh I had done it!

KingLemon
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KingLemon
600 posts
Nomad

~HashTag DANG IT!~
#ThatFeelingYouGet
WhenYouThinkOfAHaiku
ButCan'tGetTheLast

MagicTree
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MagicTree
749 posts
Nomad

Well done Riptizoid!
You're learning the way, young one.
Now, goodbye! Ninjaaa!

acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

I missed another!
Now I feel effin ashamed...
Forever Alone

murasaki9
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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Welcome Riptizoid101, to Haiku Land! Where you get to post haikus to your hearts content and the subject is not restricted to nature. Haiku what you feel!

Also Welcome, MagicTree.

Evryday, more come
I am happy to see you
Haiku hearts away

Ernie15
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Ernie15
13,344 posts
Bard

Threads of spam prevail
No moderators in sight
Spam triumphs once more

KingLemon
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KingLemon
600 posts
Nomad

How are you today?
My fine fellow citizens.
I am doing great!

Ernie15
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Ernie15
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Bard

The epics of AG


That first line of yours
Has an extra syllable
For "AG" has two
JimmyDimples
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JimmyDimples
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Blacksmith

Failure taints us all.
To have one is not shameful.
To stay that way is.

KingLemon
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KingLemon
600 posts
Nomad

Failure an option?
I laugh at that idea!
I reject failure!

Ernie15
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Ernie15
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Bard

I miss the Tavern
And when people posted there
Now it's just Utah

EmperorPalpatine
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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

It is not Utah:
There is no polygamy...
It's more like Vermont.

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