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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

RiptiZoid101!!! Gummy Bearsssss!!

I love gummy bears
and I have some gummy bears
there were forty eight

cablecar1
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Nomad

I have desire
To take over the world
And outlaw Haiku(s?)

cablecar1
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cablecar1
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Nomad

Not when I rule, high!
But not high, like with cocaine,
But with power's rush!

BWAHAHA.

Riptizoid101
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Farmer

Yes murasaki
Let us enjoy gummy bears
They are so awesome

Ernie15
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Bard

This user is only


Here, you see a line
With an extra syllable
This is not allowed!
cablecar1
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Nomad

Thanks, Waluigi,
You have flawed the format well!
This topic shall fall!

I'm gonna be the anti-haiku villain. Don't mind me. :3

dair5
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Shepherd

There's a villain now?
How much have I missed? Haiku,
I will avenge you!

Short circuit my mind.
With these tasks that give no love.
So I lose intrest

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Blaspheming scoundrel!
We must destroy the hater:
THIS IS HAIKU LAND!!!

*kicks cablecar1 into a pit*

cablecar1
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cablecar1
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Nomad

I will free myself!
I will be the avenger!
You dare assault me?

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Just to break the doldrums, it really is humorous seeing people trying to cram in whatever they can think of in their haikus just to follow the format.

Pazx
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Peasant

why nichodemus
cruel words tear this thread apart
youre a real dbag

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Just saying Pazx, if it wasn't for you being lazy and shortening it to ''You're'' in the last line, it wouldn't have been a haiku.

Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

Jeez Nichodemus
Don't be a grammar nazi.
Thats not very nice.

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

What's a little word,
Between two old close buddies,
Two years it's been now.

Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

I don't understand.
Are you talking about Pazx?
He called you dbag.

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