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Haiku's can be fun.
They have a simple pattern.
Just five, seven five.

I lost to myself.
I couldn't remember you.
For I lost myself.

Darktroop07, your haikus are so dark. I like them.

Wishing I Had A Cat

Cats are amazing.
Some others think otherwise.
..Wish I had a cat.

In the forest they
sat 'round the fire in the night,
waiting for sunrise.

Is fire one syllable or two?

Well by nature I'm a very gloomy and calm person so I guess they reflect me.
I hanged myself.
For I wished to die.
The rope ripped free.
This one was very random I know XD.
I liked my life.
My life loved me back as well.
Life continued on.
That contrasts the last one XD.

One-three-three-seven
A notorious number
With feeble meaning

@Darktroop7: Your first haiku has a 4-5-4 syllable scheme. Haikus generally have a 5-7-5 syllable scheme. Your second haiku also only has four syllables in the first line.

Well we have different accents so I guess that can't be helped cause the way I say it it goes 5-7-5 so don;t blame me >.>
Ebony appears.
Light slowly diminishes.
Where is the exit.
What about this one >.>?

I was lost in though.
Until they found me alone.
I loved being there.

Fighting for freedom,
Fall of a valiant soldier
Resting in the Lord.

The battle was fought.
But that wasn't all they'd done.
The war had been won.

Inspiring Work

So inspiring work!
The Mona Lisa portrait!
Even in Dubai!

Bosses in Games

The bosses in games
Are frequently annoying
And really stupid.

You always die there.
Then, you respawn and get killed
Until you rage quit.

Like medieval knights
Armor clad, in fields battle
To reap victory

jkl3848, your haikus are very thought provoking. Thank you for contributing to this thread.


This is my bright hour
it's my chance to shine aloud
so don't burn me out

I like poetry.
I don't mind contributing.
It is my past-time.

I am by myself.
I stand while I ponder life.
I cannot return.