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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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So, now we haiku about sad things. Let me get with the flow.

Today
I have been working
all this for some other man
and when will it end

Darktroop07
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http://armorgames.com/image/armatar_110_25.25_c.jpg
I fear dusk is near.
I couldn't fear the sight.
I was at my end.

dair5
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From the ground rises
A newborn child. Strong, wise,
It is at it's prime.

murasaki9
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There is a close friend
who appears out of nowhere
they love you just so

VinceNeille
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Can I share a thought?
I really hope that I can.
Haiku'ing is great!

murasaki9
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Yes, you may, VinceNeille
please do proceed with your thought
For I am all ears

Darktroop07
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You have no life too.
For you are already dead.
So find out yourself.

murasaki9
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All these people here
Have way too much ******** time
Please, go get real lives

Hey, if you have nothing better to do than go around criticizing people then don't post here. At least, don't post in my threads. Thank you.

It is time to go
I know I will not miss you.
Please leave quietly.
Darktroop07
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I have no idea.
I have no no pride left in me.
I feel like I'm dead.

murasaki9
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And neither do I
I'll just sit in this corner
and wait for its end

Darktroop07
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School will begin soon.
I shall have to depart now.
For school begins now.

jkl3848
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A good haiku is:
Haiku's are easy,
but they don't always make sense.
Refrigerator.
Refrigerator can be replaced with another word like tuberculosis.

jkl3848
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There once was a man,
who liked to eat lots of pie.
I guess that is it.

That shows how easy haiku's are, if they don't need meaning. Most good haiku's have meaning though.

Darktroop07
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http://armorgames.com/image/armatar_110_25.25_c.jpg
Why tell us we know?
For if you post here you know.
No need to explain.

murasaki9
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jkl3848, would you mind posting original haikus? The one about the random haikus with 'refrigerator' at the end isn't original. I've heard it before many times.

Thank you, Dark Trooper
you have made this very clear
so now we all know

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