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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Rapyion
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Emptiness

I feel so empty.
I don't feel happy or sad.
There's no emotion.

I can feel the trees,
Being blown by the strong wind.
The wind has feelings

Stronger than myself.
I feel like I am shackled,
Trapped in emptiness.

Rapyion
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The Future

How is the future?
Will it be the same like now
Or futuristic?

Like technology,
Advanced and complicated,
No cash, but credits.

Are these things all true?
There will be rural places
Even in cities.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Why do we all laugh.
Why does the world go mocking.
Will we see the smile.

murasaki9
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I have nothing now
because you are gone from me
if only you'd come

I spend all my time
wishing you were here right now
this is such a dream

killersup10
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this is not a dream
this is a hell for some but
also the heaven

murasaki9
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let heaven be good
let hell be living horror
we don't want to be

killersup10
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the deepness if this
is just to much for they souls
it consumes them

murasaki9
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Don't give me hooey
just give me the truth and clear
your tainted *repta

*reputation

Ernie15
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Bard

Adbots, oh adbots,
Why won't you leave us alone?
You make us quite sad.

xShiftedHD
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Nomad

This is probably my best.

Chinese Flowers:
by: xShiftedHD
On the Chinese vase
flowers retain brightness
pouring out water.

murasaki9
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I like that one, Shift. Thank you for posting.

Note: You may post a haiku about whatever you wish as long as it follows the 5-7-5 format.

colossal waves crash
the sea foams and reaches out
to claim what it wants

killersup10
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haha,no offense.KILLERSUP SAID NO OFFENSE!!!!!!!
party rocking all
night killersup was, partying
ya'll can suck it

murasaki9
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haha,no offense.KILLERSUP SAID NO OFFENSE!!!!!!!

What is killersup talking about? Murasaki doesn't understand?

For a secret friend
I am watching you
but you aren't noticing
I so wish you would
killersup10
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if ya ever left me
i would die from lonelyness
i love you too much

murasaki9
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Nice, killersup. Murasaki like that one haiku there.

erytime I see you
I get this fuzzy feeling
oh please won't you stay

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