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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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killersup10
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my guts takes dives in
my stomach everytime
time i see your face


but you feel nothing
for me and my lonely soul
so dispare follows

murasaki9
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Wowie, killersup seem depressed... killersup's haikus are depressing.

I feel so sad now
killersup seem really down
what is he saying

killersup10
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killersup ain't got
alot of good stuff to write
about,i need a hug


don't feel sad for me
there is nothing left, save me
but there may be none

murasaki9
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killersup will get
a hug from murasaki
she can give that much

murasaki loves
she never ignores people
and the things they need

killersup10
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killersup feels good
not great,only she can do that
the love keeps growing

murasaki9
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murasaki pleased
everyone must feel love
it's a given right

killersup10
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unforuntely
some never find it,and they are
(poor)in the meaning of love(lets pretend this is only 5 sylibles)

murasaki9
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murasaki is
one of those poor unforch'nates
but she is content

killersup10
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it will come,young one
eventually it must
for everyone hmmm


but the thing is that
you must make the best of it
and go for his soul


and never let go murasaki

Ernie15
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Bard

I like cherry pie.
Even when McD's makes it.
It's been too long, pie.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

I admire you.
But you do not take a look.
I feel I am lost.

jkl3848
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Peasant

I'm eating ice cream.
It has liquid nitrogen.
It's not Dip'n'Dots.

murasaki9
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some people are lost
others know nothing of this
thing that we speak of

killersup is kind
he tries to encourage me
with confident words

Darktroop makes no sense
but then what would I expect
He's an enigma

one that I still like
mystery is part of me
I don't live without

killersup10
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go by the saying
do as i say,not as i
do,this is safeour


sorry for spelling
killersup is new to it
it is cool though


killersup feels
deppressed again
but hey,it happens


she still barely
notices me,it torture
forever time be


killersup is soooo meh.so much work.all put off.now killersup is so close timed.and killersup still loves her

murasaki9
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awwww... who does killersup love? Does killersup see her everyday? Killersup ought to tell her how much he loves her. Maybe she'll realize...

and the moon falls down
the sun is starting to come
the is starting

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