Yah, so! I wanted a thread where I could just put up my thoughts, random ones at that. Of course, how long was I going to wait? I realized, I'd have to create one myself. Ha, ha! I was kind of slow there. Anyway, I'm thinking of something funny:
By the way, I want feedback, you know, like what you think? To me, that's the most important thing, what others think of my ideas. Because I think in stories. If someone thinks my idea is awesome, I just might write a story out of it. Hey, you never know. You just might come up with a best-selling book idea.
I believe in souls. My soul is my life. I'm alive, because I have a soul. I believe the soul is what makes life. There's nothing but the soul that makes us live. Without souls, we'd be animals.
Quite guiding me! I can find my way down my path of destiny on my own! If you don't stop I'll have to be forced to eliminate you all!
As I remember my last moment of happiness How, at that time, I felt so shameless Sitting, smiling stupidly and softly And then I found you You led me to believe a life anew Reserved strictly for me Now I can't find a moment's peace How I wish I could smile again Instead I'm smashed by zen Can I just die now?
Feedback: I really enjoyed that last line in your last piece, it felt strong and moving.
that's the most important thing, what others think of my ideas
a belief that will lead to self-destruction.....
What you're saying here is, animals don't have souls. Which means animals don't live
..... as per my belief.... such an ignorant statement... on both accounts.... if u wish to delve further into this..... just ask me..... but of course it WILL lead to science vs religion andddddd.... we can easily avoid that ever-lasting debate.
My soul is my life. I'm alive, because I have a soul. I believe the soul is what makes life. There's nothing but the soul that makes us live. Without souls, we'd be animals
everything u said up until that was ok..... no offense.....
The future... Metal on metal Ships 'cross the big black Thoughts expand Until one has 'covered 'Covered the secret 'Covered the great held Give others a chance Others expand Into happiness Great future I see Do you?
When creating this I left quite a mystery hidden by making the grammar confusing, very experimental. Does it work?
*is depressed to find another person in the AMW using same armatar* But other than that, I chuckled at the first post thingie.
I think what you mean in the second thing, is... we would be creatures that no one could understand? Hell that line has so many different interpretaions, I'm not gonna go through them all.
I'll be keeping an eye on this. And you. I hear you are making a story with Wolf, and for him to accept you as that you must be pretty darn good. So I will be lurking... mwahaha
Thank you, Moonfairy, whatever that was supposed to mean. I'm thinking about something odd right now.
A complex. What if everything isn't actually here? Or maybe some things are real, but others are a figment of my imagination? Is imagination more powerful than knowledge? I saw something strange today. A squirrel was on my roof. My house is, by the way a three story house.
I feel like a leaf, being blown along by the wind. I can't straighten out. I'm being blown away. I'm being blown up to the sky, out to space. Finally, I'll reach the place I'm trying to go.
Here's an excerpt from one of my books. Inspiration I've been searching for something. I call it inspiration. I finally found it. It was there all along. I just missed it. I missed the kind words here and there. I missed the small smiles here and there. I missed the gentle touch here and there. I missed what my friends were trying to give me all along. But finally, one special friend was able to help me see and he didn't have to tell me. Just his kindness alone allowed my eyes to be opened so that I could see what inspiration really was. Inspiration is what drives one forward, to achieve more, to go further. And I love my inspiration.
There is one who sticks closer than a brother There is a rare form of friendship. This relationship is hard to come by and hard to keep. There is one who stays closer than a brother. He is the one who also feels your grief, wiping your tears away. He is the one who also feels your pain, holding You close to him in your suffering. He is the one who also feels your joy, celebrating with You in your glittering moments. He is the one who also feels your triumph, uplifting You for all the world to see. He is the one who also feels your pride, praising You appropriately in your moments of success. He is the one who feels You. Taking You for who You are. He is the one who understands You the way no one else does or can. He is the one who does so many things for You. He is the one who loves You unto death. He is the one who puts You before himself. He is the one who commands your respect and your love. Do You love him? Do You respect him? Do You also comfort him in grief and pain? Do You also rejoice with him in his triumph and gladness? All the things he does for You, do You do them for him? Does he deserve what You do for him? Do You deserve what he does for You? Think carefully. Do You know of whom I speak? If so, is he all the things I mentioned here? If he isn't, then he isn't the one characterized here. If his all these things, do You treat him as worthy of your respect? Do You render to him his due, for all the things he does for You?
"a belief that will lead to self-destruction....." no endscape. that belief will not lead to self destruction but to better ideas and stories that people like
