An enemy knight on a horse causes him to dismount from the stegosaurus, therefore causing the stegosaurus, man, and cousin to go though the dimensional portal.
The portal then spat them out again and said "Screw this, you're not paying me enough", after which he simply transported himself away from those ****ed madmen.
The portal then spat them out again and said "Screw this, you're not paying me enough", after which he simply transported himself away from those ****ed madmen.
Portals are not people, so the correct pronoun is it.
Anyway:
The stegosaurus then knocks some gold from a merchant into the portal, then the stegosaurus, man, and cousin go into the portal.
then knocks some gold from a merchant into the portal
The portal transported himself away. It's not there. Sorry to interrupt the story telling, but you sort of just contradicted the previous sentence in the story. Big no-no.
The cousin, man, stegosaurus and merchant are confused by this strange passage of time, like the gods of this story are disagreeing on something. Well, the portal returns with an alien. Then...
The portal transported himself away. It's not there. Sorry to interrupt the story telling, but you sort of just contradicted the previous sentence in the story. Big no-no.
Do not hijack the thread. Also,
himself
Why are you giving the portal a gender when it needs none? The portal is not a person or animal.
Therefore, I will continue from my previous post:
The portal takes the three to ancient times, where the man and cousin begin shooting the stegosaurus with lasers.
Oh crap! I was ninja'd, so there needs to be some kind of resolution.
The cousin, man, stegosaurus and merchant are confused by this strange passage of time, like the gods of this story are disagreeing on something. Well, the portal returns with an alien. Then...
How about this for a resolution:
Somewhere in ancient times, a man and his cousin are in a laser fight with a stegosaurus. Then, an alien enters through a dimensional portal.
