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Posted Sep 4, '08 at 7:54pm

gman1000

gman1000

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I was inspired while talking to firetail_madness.

Here is something I whipped up in a few minutes. I will add more later.

Prolouge

A piercing shriek erupted from the maw of a beast, racing through a village. Men cowered in fear. Women in children held each other for comfort. There was no escape. It would come and hunt them down. A sudden breeze blew out all of the village lanterns. The only light left was the full moon. Its light was a source of pain for the villagers. The moon seemed so close that they might be able to escape from the horrendous, yet it was so far away. It taunted them.

They knew that soon they would be stripped of all life. Taken away from the very things they knew and loved. They would instantly be gone from this life, into whatever awaited them after. They said their last prayers.

Another shriek filled the village. Yes, tonight they would be gone. There was no hope. The Krakzah were coming.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:08pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

21,765 posts

Wow, nice beginning!

It really juices you up. Probably better then mine.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:25pm

gman1000

gman1000

1,019 posts

Thank you very much. I will continue to write this in my spare time.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:42pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

21,765 posts

By, the way, what are the Krakzah?!

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:43pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

21,765 posts

Oh, never mind then...

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:43pm

gman1000

gman1000

1,019 posts

That is for me to know, and for you to find out LATER.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:44pm

thingthingfreak

thingthingfreak

1,628 posts

They sound like the Kalkara from the Rangers Apperntice books

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:45pm

Ricador

Ricador

3,913 posts

Looks good.

Can't wait.

It pumps you up with the suspensish feel :P

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:48pm

Ricador

Ricador

3,913 posts

Subconsciously. I will change the name.


Well does it really matter? As long as it is not exactly the same...

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:49pm

gman1000

gman1000

1,019 posts

Oops, sorry. Man, I accidently made it sound like that. Subconsciously. I will change the name.

 
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