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I was talking with Nich not you Alt, and you said "Hopefully he won't come back." not Nich.

In any case, I just want to stop talking about it.

Mhmm...working on a new poem...doesn't have rhyme...anyway, at least that got the thread some publicity.

New poem! Erm...yeah I write very fast.

Only Fools Cry

Only fools cry their hearts out,
For only fools can feel the pain.
Only fools cry their hearts out,
For only fools know how it feels.

Only fools cry through the lonely night,
For only fools have the reasons.
Only fools cry through the lonely night
For only fools understand the world.

Only fools cry their eyes red,
For only fools aren't afraid to do so.
Only fools cry their eyes red,
For only fools care to do so.

Only fools cry at the heavens,
For only fools lament the dead.
Only fools cry at the heavens,
For only fools dare to express it all.

Only fools cry at the bitter truth,
For only fools do not run away.
Only fools cry at the bitter truth,
For only fools do not turn and hide.

Only fools cry without a thought,
For only fools dare to remember.
Only fools cry without a thought,
For only fools acknowledge the losses.

Only fools cry for time eternal,
For only fools have tasted the rawness.
Only fools cry for time eternal,
For only fools feel the blues.

Only bloody fools can cry like I do,
For only fools can comprehend each other.
Only bloody fools can cry like I do,
Though none will weep ever so sorrowfully.

God, you do write fast. *lucky mumble mumble*

Nice peom. I PITY DA FOO! Lulz

Very foolish of a peom you got there. Ok I can't stop.

You really write fast...and well...that was so good I put it right on the fridge.

What they said :P. Anyways I like it, though I cant seem to get the picture of somebody standing out in the rain with no umbrella out of my head... I'm scared. Should I be scared? I feel scared.

Erm wait umbrella? I didn't write about an umbrella...

Where'd the Umbrella come from Mav?

Any new projects in teh future that might come soon Nich?

Erm...I don't know...I just had some massive row with my parents, and I think they think AG is sorta poisoning my morality or something. So I may or may not be on.

Death Is But Another Step

It's a silent gush of wind,
That tingles your numb skin.
It takes but does not give,
Black and dripping as an olive.

It's a blessed gift from the Elders,
To sleep fitfully beneath the cedars.
It refreshes the weary travelers,
And incites all the explorers.

It's not something I will fear,
Angel songs our ghosts hear.
Cross over to the other side,
Before the chasm splits too wide.

It's a half way mark in our journey,
Where the Devil commits his felony.
All the damned will be take away,
To start a brand new day.

Death is but another step,
Leave the place where all wept.
Death is just another stop,
Before we ascend to the top.

We Walk On Complexities

I look at the bright blue sky,
And ponder to God why.

Poisoned rationality,
Infinite possibility,
Heavy liability,
Surprising fatality,
Long sought stability,
Trance like mentality.

You close your eyes,
And let out another sign.

Deadly imagination,
Multiple obstruction,
Zero expectation,
Immense ramification,
Crumbling fortification,
Corrupt medication.

I sit and drink the water,
And doze off into slumber.

Final fantasy,
High-point ecstasy,
Magical wizardry,
Dead-end alchemy,
Reckless audacity,
Cloudy mystery.

You stay motionless all along,
While humming a song.

Aimless expedition,
Timeless exploration,
Endless clarification,
Teasing tantalization,
Curious sensation,
Thankful gratification.

We live in a bubble of complexities,
For life has not unveiled its entireties.
A dimension of a thousand feelings,
A universe of brilliant meanings.

*sweeps in* oo er, I just realised the title needed slight adjustment, please excuse me. What should I change it to? The Darned just doesn't have the same ring to it D:

Very good Nich!!

Your poems are good..

*sweeps in* oo er, I just realised the title needed slight adjustment, please excuse me. What should I change it to? The Darned just doesn't have the same ring to it D: