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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted August 24, '09 12:48am UTC

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Thyll

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Nomad

Posted October 23, '09 6:09pm UTC

Choices

Survey the crash scene
The road of life can lead to
wherever you want.

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Ernie15

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Bard

Posted October 24, '09 6:14pm UTC

When is the judging?
I'm waiting for the judging.
Just judge already!

(real entry on page 32)

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FloydTC

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Nomad

Posted October 24, '09 10:27pm UTC

can I still enter or are the entries closed?

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StormDragon

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Peasant

Posted October 25, '09 4:03am UTC

The entries aren't closed until a judgging date is anouced or someone judges the entries.

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sourwhatup2

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Jester

Posted October 25, '09 4:50am UTC

The entries aren't closed until a judgging date is anouced or someone judges the entries.

Oh, and me about to write a Haiku xDD

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the_manta

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Peasant

Posted October 25, '09 7:07pm UTC

RARW

JUDGE NAO

Please? Seriously, it seems like nothing gets judged on time here.

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Shepherd

Posted October 25, '09 7:10pm UTC

Mav got shot again, that is about the 5th time he has been shot. *sigh* He needs to stop living so dangerously, especially since we are all depending on him.

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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted October 27, '09 10:27pm UTC

Swine Flu, then grounded for missing something while I was sick, so...

But it got resolved, so Ungrounded! Yay!

Mav got shot again, that is about the 5th time he has been shot. *sigh* He needs to stop living so dangerously, especially since we are all depending on him.

Thats what happens in the Hood. Eh, Suburbs!

Yeah, Judging now.

Judgeing...

Jujing...

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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted October 27, '09 10:58pm UTC

Judging!
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Champions Exibit: LittleNinjaMan

I have seen it all
Sights, along the Longest Road
And I keep walking

And the entry from LittleNinjaMan, who previously won the previous contest. Previously. Think I've said 'reviously' previously too many times. Weird. Anywho, its good, great, terrific. Eh...

Wood Plaque Award: Jdoggparty

I see Mercury
I measure with all the stars
A long walk awaits

Silver Plaque Award: hypoxia

A long way to go
Rest, pause, reflect, carry on
One goal, many paths

Gold Plaque Award: Yielee AND Graham

A Tie! *gasp* Well, heres Yielee's first:

Smoke Streaming Skyward
Carries Thoughts To Ancestors
Heaven's Road Is Long

And Graham:

Boundless forever
These roads, matrical havens
Homogeneous

Anyways, It just wasnt right putting Graham or Yielee in silver, so I decided to bend the rules. And I CAN do that. I think...

Platinum-Certified Award: Ernie15

The road to nowhere
Runs forward for many miles
Does it ever end?

Andale! Andale! Whatever that means... Anywho, I like it. Alot. And arn't you the guy with 65 merits... Maby you shouldnt win...

*Twilight Zone*

Go getcha merit from Carlie. Just tell her you won here.

Dont bug me about not commenting on your haikus. Trust me, its better than having what I wrote. Not that it was bad, but it just seemed that i was saying the same thing over and over and over again. I'm only good at constructive criticism. Like this guy:

Well, that just about sums it up for whats next. The next theme is Pine Sea, and will be judged Wednsday, November 4th. And sorry for the long wait on judging, but you get a bit extra time, I think...

Heres a little sample I made, a while back:

Shrouded sea of pine
Orange-robed monks meditate
Nettles drifting down

Only a first part, but the post glitched so the next two stanzas gut messed up, but I never fixed it...
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The Pond: Alt
The Fruit Tree: GuitarHeroFTW
Mountains: Hectichermit
Through The Haze: Yielee
In a Garden: Bronze
Longest Road: Ernie15
Pine Sea:
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Judging! :D\r\n---\r\n[b]Champions Exibit: LittleNinjaMan[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]I have seen it all\r\nSights, along the Longest Road\r\nAnd I keep walking[/i]\r\n\r\nAnd the entry from LittleNinjaMan, who previously won the previous contest. Previously. Think I've said 'previously' previously too many times. Weird. Anywho, its good, great, terrific. Eh...\r\n\r\n[b]Wood Plaque Award: Jdoggparty[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]I see Mercury\r\nI measure with all the stars\r\nA long walk awaits[/i]\r\n\r\n[b]Silver Plaque Award: hypoxia[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]A long way to go\r\nRest, pause, reflect, carry on\r\nOne goal, many paths[/i]\r\n\r\n[b]Gold Plaque Award: Yielee [i]AND[/i] Graham[/b]\r\n\r\nA Tie! *gasp* Well, heres Yielee's first:\r\n\r\n[i]Smoke Streaming Skyward\r\nCarries Thoughts To Ancestors\r\nHeaven's Road Is Long[/i]\r\n\r\nAnd Graham:\r\n\r\n[i]Boundless forever\r\nThese roads, matrical havens\r\nHomogeneous [/i]\r\n\r\nAnyways, It just wasnt right putting Graham or Yielee in silver, so I decided to bend the rules. And I CAN do that. I think...\r\n\r\n[b]Platinum-Certified Award: Ernie15[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]The road to nowhere\r\nRuns forward for many miles\r\nDoes it ever end?[/i]\r\n\r\nAndale! Andale! Whatever that means... Anywho, I like it. Alot. And arn't you the guy with 65 merits... Maby you shouldnt win... \r\n\r\n*Twilight Zone*\r\n\r\nGo getcha merit from Carlie. Just tell her you won here.\r\n\r\nDont bug me about not commenting on your haikus. Trust me, its better than having what I wrote. Not that it was bad, but it just seemed that i was saying the same thing over and over and over again. I'm only good at constructive criticism. Like this guy:\r\n\r\n[img]http://gregverdino.typepad.com/greg_verdinos_blog/images/2007/04/01/simon_cowell.jpg[/img]\r\n\r\nWell, that just about sums it up for whats next. The next theme is [b]Pine Sea[/b], and will be judged [b]Wednsday, November 4th[/b]. And sorry for the long wait on judging, but you get a bit extra time, I think...\r\n\r\nHeres a little sample I made, a while back:\r\n\r\nShrouded sea of pine\r\nOrange-robed monks meditate\r\nNettles drifting down\r\n\r\nOnly a first part, but the post glitched so the next two stanzas gut messed up, but I never fixed it...\r\n-----\r\nThe Pond: Alt\r\nThe Fruit Tree: GuitarHeroFTW\r\nMountains: Hectichermit\r\nThrough The Haze: Yielee\r\nIn a Garden: Bronze\r\nLongest Road: Ernie15\r\nPine Sea:\r\n-----