ForumsArt, Music, and WritingFirst Line Poetry

1617 192336
Parsat
offline
Parsat
2,194 posts
2,840

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

  • 1,617 Replies
MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,391 posts
1,445

Hehehe. Kyo, you have only seen me happy haven't you? I have my diffferent sides you know... Anger, Sadness, Evil, Happy, all very different in comparison. That was a small taste of Evil. I told you about my Anger already. hehehe

Kyouzou
offline
Kyouzou
5,095 posts
3,975

...Now you're gonna tell me you're bipolar lol

MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,391 posts
1,445

Only slightly! I haven't been diagnosed with it, but I have my suspicions. lol. Everyone is a bit bipolar XD

Kyouzou
offline
Kyouzou
5,095 posts
3,975

That's usually how emotions work, no?

MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,391 posts
1,445

what is the question o.o

MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,391 posts
1,445

Parsat, this is an awesome Contest thingie. I love it!

pHacon
offline
pHacon
1,909 posts
310

^I agree, I'm putting out more poetry and having more fun doing it than ever

Petty little thief
Stealing my heart like you did...
Keep it, you have earned it
It would have been yours anyways.

Oh vile little rouge
Why must you leave me like this?
Open and empty, my spirit's blood draining.
I don't know how I can survive any longer without you.

Hoping against a ninja..

But why me?

MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,391 posts
1,445

But why me?
I have always asked myself
What crime did I commit,
That would make me deserve this?

I was always true
To you
And then you left me out of the blue
Tears ran down my face
My heart was ripped in two

So here I am wondering
What Did I Do Wrong?
Trying to figure out
Why my life
Is a heart break song.


Fields of Green

pHacon
offline
pHacon
1,909 posts
310

Fields of Green
Stretching on forever
Like the joy of my heart,
They sing.

Skies of Blue
So high yet so deep
Where do you lead?
To happiness.

My heart sings

MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,391 posts
1,445

I like it pHacon. nice.

My heart sings
When I hear your voice
I can leap over mountains, streams, and skies.

My heart smiles
When I see your face
With you I know I can fly.

Ninja'd? lets hope not.

The ocean is a place

Graham
offline
Graham
8,089 posts
580

The ocean is a place
Where I can feel grace
Standing here alone
Gazing unto this lost mirror.

Trees are poopy

pHacon
offline
pHacon
1,909 posts
310

Ahh, one I can relate to. Thank you.

The ocean is the place
Where my dreams come alive
And I can be free
Of all life's troubles.

The ocean is the place
I call my home
Where I am at peace
No matter what.

You are my ocean
My port in stormy weather
My heart.
My soul.

Too tired to edit the sentimentality from that one.
damn Graham.. lulz

Trees are poopy
Just like that dog
I hate dogs
Cats are much better.
Where are your lulz now, Anonymous?

Free as a bird

MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,391 posts
1,445

LMFAO. XD Snazzy.

Free as a bird
Flying all night
Flying all day
With all of my might

Diving down fast
Feel the air rush around me
Can't catch me now
Free as anyone could ever possibly be.

Wow that one sucked but oh well. XD

Days passed

Avorne
offline
Avorne
3,112 posts
655

Days passed
Under the sun
Your smooth touch
Upon my skin

Years passed
In the rain
I no longer
Feel your touch

Atop a cliff

MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,391 posts
1,445

Atop a cliff
I wonder
Staring down into the water
What it would feel like,
Those few seconds of free falling

Fear?
Adrenaline?
Terror?
Thrill?

I might just take the jump
To find out.

Wowza.

Just gonna stand there

Showing 31-45 of 1617