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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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MoonFairy
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Many a sleepless night I found,
Myself thinking of you.
The way you walk,
The way you sing,
The way you talk.
The more I think of you,
The more I dream of you,
Without ever actually sleeping.

Sucks, but I am going against the ninja here...

Starry skies

pHacon
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Starry skies,
The beauty of the cosmos.
How does it feel
To look back in time?

Short poem is short

What I do for you

slayguy8
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What i do for you
id everything
cooking cleaning
to me you have no meaning
thats what i do for you

why me

Joey6855
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What I do for you,
Is combine u and i to make two.
And even though our lives are poo,
I know ill always have you.

Sucked huh? but its my first one.

I wake to the sunlight

MoonFairy
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Why me?
I ask myself all the time.
Why me?
Why do I deserve to be the victim of his crime?

wont finish that one lol.

HEY SHAMALAMA DING DONG

pHacon
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Joey's:
I wake to the sunlight
of this glorious day
Dawn's beauty breaking
through the clouds
I feel happiness.

Moon's:

HEY SHAMALAMA DING DONG
THIS PHRASE SOUNDS SO WRONG
Someone must have bought a new bong...

Are you sure?

MoonFairy
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Ninja'd. a very late ninja.... hmm hopefully i will not be ninja'd as i try to fix the ninja'd-ed.

I wake to the sunlight,
To find you beside me.
Nothing is more beautiful than you,
Because you are all I see.
I want to be there as you awaken.
I want to help you calm down when you feel shaken.

I will always be here
To hold your hand
To wipe your tears
To dance with you
To hold you near
To sing with you
To get rid of your fears.

I love you.
With every cell in me.
I know you do too.
You have my heart and the key.



Never written it from a guys POV. kewl.
I so know that i have been ninja'd BUT OH FRIGGIN WELL.

MoonFairy
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http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx210/MikuMitsuki/tumblr_l4wnivi1HU1qzo1a0o1_500.png

slayguy8
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Are you sure?
that the sky is blue
Are you sure?
that penguins never flew

Are you sure?
that space is endless
Are you sure?
that is not yor mess

Are you sure?
that we are not specks of dust
Are you sure?
that we must

Are you sure?

next line
How do i get out of here

pHacon
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How do I get out of here?
This nightmare, it controls me.
There is but one way out,
But that requires more than I am able.

The way is shut,
The drums are sounding,
My time draws near,
My heart is pounding.

As I see his face
Terror grips me
My worst enemy is:
Myself.

Random, yet not...

Help us escape

Gantic
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Help us escape
Cardboard prisons
We've grown too big
Please help, children

I did not know your name when we first met

Secretmapper
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I did not know your name when we first met
But when I ask you would always threat
That you would cut my head off so that
It can shut up and wear no bad hat


ARMORGAMES IS THE BEST SITE EVER!

aknerd
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Help us escape
Your life is already Forfeit
You death already certain
to be horrible.

The sharks are hunting
But one catch
Will be
enough


But We
Our future obscure,
Doom questionable.
A singular fool cannot
Compare to an eternal pool

The hawkes will gladly
Take just one
And leave
Us

We are endless
But trapped
Our children, not yet born
Trapped with us
Your everything ends
with you

The Wolves are hungry
You can satisfy
Their need
Easily

Help us escape

That got a little dark...
!@#$%^ I got ninja'd.

Well here's a short poem so that my new line will still count.

I did not know your name when we first met
But you knew mine
You showed up at my door
And served me a subpoena
What are you doing later?

Next:
A Leafless Branch

wolf1991
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A leafless branch.
Pity.
Cold wind ripped you.
Oh cruel.
It sheds your cloak
Relentless.
Of golden greens and red.
Monster.
Where will you hide?
Child.
Until spring comes.

Next: Amid the wonders and tears I smile.

Secretmapper
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Amid the wonders and tears I smile
Sweet I yuck and bitter are mine
GOOD is bad while BAD is good
And happy is sad while sad is jolly!

Old Macdoneld(to prevent copyright issues) had a sl*t

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