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Posted May 23, '11 at 8:21pm

shailajaisrani

shailajaisrani

281 posts

i think a lot of people are

 

Posted May 23, '11 at 8:27pm

candyman222

candyman222

59 posts

i think a lot


i know i mean i know how to do it but it is hared to come up with stuff with all this stuff
 

Posted May 23, '11 at 9:22pm

Paarfam

Paarfam

1,607 posts

im bad at hiku
i think a lot of people are


Practice, practice, practice! You'll get it!
 

Posted May 23, '11 at 9:23pm

shailajaisrani

shailajaisrani

281 posts

i dont even really know what it is though.i can write poems and stories but not haikus

 

Posted May 24, '11 at 9:28am

jeol

jeol

3,987 posts

i dont even really know what it is though.i can write poems and stories but not haikus

It's probably simpler than you think. A haiku consists of three lines. The first is five syllables, the second seven, the third five again. Haikus are usually about nature or the seasons. An example haiku:

Trees of the Land (<- a title that fits, but isn't the same as your first line)

Trees in a forest (<- usually topic of idea)
their mighty branches swaying (<- the action or idea)
ruling o'er the land. (<- conclusion / wrapping up idea)

And.. I guess I'll submit that as one of my pieces, then. Yeah, I just wrote it.

Trees of the Land

Trees in a forest
their mighty branches swaying
ruling o'er the land.
 

Posted May 24, '11 at 10:17am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Haiku for the ages

This is what I write
A haiku for the ages
may they be blessed

 

Posted May 25, '11 at 12:44pm

Endscape

Endscape

1,244 posts

Aaaa Women

Beautiful women
they r everywhere i look
what a world so great

 

Posted May 25, '11 at 1:40pm

deathopper

deathopper

1,583 posts

The tunnels

I walk down tunnels
Were gleams of light shine
Will they ever end?
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Endscape you're haiku made me lol.

 

Posted May 25, '11 at 3:13pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Thanks Endscape. Thanks Deathopper.
I love your haikus.

Rain
Falling around me
sprinkling down from the sky
it makes the world turn.

 

Posted May 31, '11 at 11:24am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

About a Haiku

A question I have
Can you beat up a haiku
no, it is too strong

About the haiku that wrote about a haiku

That haiku is bad
it thinks it is so clever
I'm even better *with a wink and a rubbing of its letters*

 
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