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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Endscape
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I'm sorry, what?
No, this isn't a thread for taking the last line of what was left by the last person and forming a poem using it. The bold 'Hold on' is supposed to be the title. This is for thread is for contributing haikus.


already knew all of this.... i posted a few times on this already..... i took your last line murasaki which is why i made it in bold, and did not quote it because it would... off. Simply trying to give this thread some...... "umph" to keep it going..... anddd all though i wasnt looking for that thread thank u maverick for finding it.
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because it would... off


meant to say *it would look off*
excuse the double post.
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Thank you Endscape. Thank you for trying to keep my thread going.
That makes me feel better. I was a bit worried for a bit, because few people post on my threads. I guess I have to be more popular. But thank you for your thoughtfulness.

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But minuscule in
his eyes, seems significant
to she, on-looking.

Significance

its fine.

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Um, Endscape, what exactly are you trying to
say here? I don't get it.

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im saying that i reallllllly didnt think much of it, its pure and simple haiku thread right? i just want to keep it going so im throwing out ideas, so in my mind u thanked me for wat was nothing to me, so i made a haiku on that

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Wow, thanks Endscape. That's sweet of you. I have a haiku for that:

Some kind acts are done
In the blindness of the night
Which only some see

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Some kind acts are done
In the blindness of the night
Which only some see


beautiful, great job..
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Thank you Endscape, as always, for your constructive
comments.

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Something random:

Sometime, we can hope
Sometimes, we can start to wish
Sometimes, we can do

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Sometimes is Excluded

Sometimes, we can not
Sometimes, succede in this life
Sometimes, without trials.


read all but "sometimes" as one sentence...

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Sometimes, It's wonderful

Sometimes, it's so good
Sometimes, it's so wonderful
To have friends who -------.

I couldn't decide what one syllable word I should put at the end. I couldn't decided what word best fit the last sentence.

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I couldn't decide what one syllable word I should put at the end. I couldn't decided what word best fit the last sentence.

Care. A simple word, but it fits, I think.
I'll post a hiaku later. mebe today, mebe never.
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Secrets

I should not be known
If i am told i wont stay
And you wont have me

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To whom it may concern...

compared to the "norm"
judged me before you knew me
I will break your heart

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