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Alexis' Assorted Writings

Posted Oct 17, '11 at 9:27pm

VinceNeille

VinceNeille

123 posts

These are fantastic and really inspire me to get back to my stories so much. The diverse styles, (including long and short) are really great ways to show the "all-around" sense of your poems and you.

Dreams
A peaceful reprieve
A dream of what couldnt be
But what I wish was.

If this wasn't the style it was, to continue it, I would have probably finished it as :
....A dream of you and me.

...Yeah, yours sounds much better.

Your "Headlights" poem is great too. Very powerful and it really puts a very vivid and clear picture in your mind about what is really happening.

These are really great. Awesome job, Alexis!! =)

 

Posted Oct 17, '11 at 9:38pm

Alexistigerspice

Alexistigerspice

620 posts

Thank you Vince!

Friend!
You are so sweet dude!
Your words mean a lot to me.
Appreciation!

 

Posted Oct 17, '11 at 10:00pm

VinceNeille

VinceNeille

123 posts

Friend!
You are so sweet dude!
Your words mean a lot to me.
Appreciation!

Your welcome!

I shall try and do an hiaku, as I've never done one before.

Your Welcome!
Sweet like candy, yo.
No charge....wait, give me a buck.
Just kidding, my friend!

xD

 

Posted Oct 18, '11 at 5:04pm

Alexistigerspice

Alexistigerspice

620 posts

A light in the dark
You are the best thing I have
The best part of me.

 

Posted Oct 18, '11 at 8:35pm

VinceNeille

VinceNeille

123 posts

A light in the dark
You are the best thing I have
The best part of me.

As awesome as this is, I would like to know the name for this great haiku; If there is a name. =)

 

Posted Oct 22, '11 at 9:19pm

Flutechick747

Flutechick747

6 posts

these r fantabulos! i have a poem also:

I play the flute, then i die.

Pretty good, huh?

 

Posted Oct 27, '11 at 10:17pm

Alexistigerspice

Alexistigerspice

620 posts

Felo de se: Mater
Trapped within herself
She tries to escape
But the poison closes in.
The words of her family,
Her mother, her father,
Her son, her daughter,
They sound good on the surface.
But she knows the truth.
In a world filled with shades of grey
She sees only black.

 

Posted Oct 29, '11 at 5:34pm

EddieSpahgetti

EddieSpahgetti

2 posts

u r talented like hardcore!!!! how du u like make profiles like writings drawings or maybe even lyrics to wutever music? hope i get a reply  thnx!

 

Posted Nov 1, '11 at 9:24pm

Alexistigerspice

Alexistigerspice

620 posts

If you are talking about how you make a thread, then you just go to the correct Forum room/ whatever and look for the green button at the top and click it. Then type a short title, explain the title in the opening post, etc.  I'm pretty sure I saw that you had created a thread that had been locked, so you probably dont need this information.

 

Posted Nov 4, '11 at 6:12pm

Alexistigerspice

Alexistigerspice

620 posts

Darkness encompasses his soul
Ever tainting his thoughts.
He is despotic,
Wishing well,
Yet the personification of evil.
Can anyone save his soul?

 
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