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Posted Mar 27, '12 at 1:07am

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

887 posts

Tomorrow i will post more poems, and I will put a lesson that i got in class about the poem style Skeltonic Verse.

 

Posted Mar 27, '12 at 7:06pm

Roccess

Roccess

176 posts

Mr. Schmidds can I help out?

Bold and Wary
If you are Bold and Wary,
Then brave are you very,
When you go into battle you think of the girl you want to marry.

For it may be the laste time your sword struck metal,
Though you wouldn't rather by home cooting by the kettle,
And listen to that sissy-boy who is always playing that fiddle.

You are Bold and Wary, nothing scares you,
You are a hero, with a stylish hairdo,
And as you go into battle, you shout, "I be killing the foo'.",
Because you are Bold and Wary.

Sorry if it was bad, I made it up on the spot.

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 12:47am

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

887 posts

Lol roccess :D i like that poem, i'm assuming its a skeltonic verse?
I wrote this long haiku edition at school today :D Enjoy:

Armor Games

If you feel lonely
Come and give us a call, yes
You will then feel home :D

I will be friendly
A lot of others will too
When you're down come here

Not many spammers
But you'll find some here and there
Almost never though

Mods always take care
And keep the junk level down
For thats their own job

Patrolling, strolling
and keeping AG clean
They are helpful, too

Gantic, Zophia
Freakenstein, NoName, Strop(pronounced sturr-op for the sylable purpose :D)
Asherlee, more

Devoidless, one more
and Mr. Walker, also
thats all the mods now

Did you like it? I definetly had fun writing it :D

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 12:50am

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

887 posts

One about turtles i wrote in class:

Turtles

Da Beastly turtle
Was the beastliest alive
No one could stop him :D

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 10:48am

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

887 posts

Almost spring burr-ake
Looking forward to no school
It bores my eyes out.

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 3:24pm

Roccess

Roccess

176 posts

I honestly don't know what a Skeltonic Verse is, but if it was one, it was completely on accident.

Dreariness
A graveyard.
I'm here again.
Even walking through it can be hard.
I wonder who I will see again, and when?
The answer is no one and never.

Has my dreariness tooken over?
I think of a lost friend.
My spirits sank lower.
It seems this feeling will never end,
Because it won't.

There is no overreaction,
When you are at a funeral
When Death gets its satisfaction.
Place the rose on the coffin before the burial.

A teardrop fell from my cheek,
This cannot be real,
Without them I feel so weak.
Their destiny has been sealed,
By Death.

I got the idea for this poem for my recent feelings. No, I have not lost someone close to me, but it feels like that.

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 9:26pm

ExitPath97

ExitPath97

40 posts

Hmmm... the first one u wrote was a skeltonic verse :D And this one that u have written now... I don't think that follows any pattern but it seems like ur going like this:
A-B-A-B-C... i'm not sure if there is any :D Its safe to call it a free verse poem :)

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 9:27pm

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

887 posts

Oops... :D I acidentally posted that in my brothers account(i forgot to log off and he was just using it). Sorry about that :O

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 10:14pm

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

887 posts

Here you go :D i worte these to ask Murasaki a question :D

Murasaki you like
my haikus? they're fun to write
Do you enjoy them?

Poetry's my thing
My niche in writing you see
I just love poems :D

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 10:52pm

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

887 posts

Here's some more i wrote at school:

MUSIC EDITION!!!

Linkin Park

Linkin Park, awesome sauce
they were better way back when.
But dey still da beast :D

Metallica

Metallica, YEAH
Their music is just the sauce
The meaning of Rock :D

Muse
Starlight, Uprising
Two of their songs i like
One of my fav bands

Volbeat
Danish Rock, Unleashed
Feel the power and the punch
In "Warrior's Call"

Rammstein

German at its best
In rock, my favorite tune
"Du Hast" is da bomb

Hope u enjoy :D