Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:
* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.
* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.
* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.
For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.
Ok don't cry, don't take this s*** personally But I'll put you in a hearse if you end up on a verse with me Cos 99% of all rappers out are worse than me And couldn't beat me iif a witch doctor put a curse on me So find yourself lucky if you ever do converse with me But I don't love college cos we call it university Greek-British rappers bring the game some diversity I can rap despite never witnessing adversity Never popped a gat nor assisted in a burglary Elbowed my way to make my name, showed great perversity I'll be surprised in 5 years time if the whole worlds never heard of me Cos I've got hoards of little birds who fly around and spread the word for me Til the fame of other rappers gets deferred, then transferred to me My lyrics are retarded and my beats pure absurdity You must have misheard cos wackness never occured to me You must be an anomaly to be undeterred by me My style is like heaven and you suckers are in purgatory
Sure, sure, delude yourself put your attitude on a shelf you know it's not true inside yourself one's gotta include oneself all you do is gang-rape ideas that are too crude for all else the shit you're pullin,' it's too lewd, too crude for the good of yourself so take up thy stethoscope and walk, just don't be good to yourself
i dont know why the fuk you guys are doing this if i were you, i would be enjoying my time with a miss, and after that than, i would of course get a kiss, so you are only ruining the fun outa this, now get out before someone shoves you out the door, and then you will feel like you were some whore;
thisisnotanalt you rhymed yourself 4 times wow dude that's pretty sad , and you say I'm weak when you can't even come up with another word to rhyme with wow........
Dude, it's called repetition. . .and you didn't even notice the internal rhyme. wow. And you also didn't retaliate with a rap. . .and it's kind of a common thing to diss others in these kinds of battles. . .sooooooo. . .actually reply with a rap, not a flame.
Dude, it's called repetition. . .and you didn't even notice the internal rhyme. wow. And you also didn't retaliate with a rap. . .and it's kind of a common thing to diss others in these kinds of battles. . .sooooooo. . .actually reply with a rap, not a flame
you are right about the repetition part but you should also reply in a rap like this:
yo, you guys are stupid for not listening to me, dont think the mods will just let this be, i am getting better at this the more i do it, and now you can too if you feel the beat, just chill down and take a passing by seat, or you might burn yourself with all that heat, now i say sonam, you say rules sonam - rules, sonam - rules, everyone else - drools, so get that thing in your fat head, youuuuuuuuuuuuu have just been made;
It was appropriate at the time lackfang says he has knowledge in rap and rhyme but then he takes the piss, flames for not noticin' i won't dignify his name with cap-it-al-iz-at-ion his fail infected so many, we'll need healthcare nat-ion-al-iz-at-ion!
I'm not easy to beat and I won't NO SHOW// I'll have thisisnotanalt look bad like Michel Phelps BONG PHOTO// I practice thats why I can reach a great FEAT// this is like the play-offs , thisisnotanalt will lose in the first round , call him MIAMI HEAT// If he climbed a mountain he couldn't reach HIS PEAK// From the way hes spelling looks like hes typing with his FEET!//
Ha! You though I meant blackfang! Well i guarantee, what fits best is lackfang. And if grammar is all you're lookin' at, thinking on your head, not your feet, blinder than a Helen Keller bat hell, like Mike, I wish I was stoned and not listening to you being PWNED.
Real thought is what you LACK-FAM// I think he want's to be lying for a CAT-SCAN , or be in underworld IN BLACK-LAND// Hes a joker , but hes coming with out a weapon while I'm holding A-BAT-MAN// IN-FACT-SCRAM , before you get left in worst action then a hero reject , like FAT-MAN!//
What the fuck did you say? I couldn't understand ya. you think it's a game, you don't know how to play if I have to read another rap, i'll go into planned amnesia you stopped making sense a long time ago your message is a hell of a lot harder to find than Carmen Sandiego!
Sonam get the f*** out if you know whats good Learn to talk well, maybe you'll reach manhood Greedy kid, wish you can get some if you could Don't worry daddy'll feed you his big wood. All the haters like you better get out fast Cause all your rhymes come out real half-as.sed A show just ain't the same with a crappy cast Get off the stage cause you'll get blast. You know me, I'm so pro I got the place up running like my ego. Come back again when you have a tempo any earlier is just a big no-no
Word, to my hydra friend. I come to this pit Of bad rhymes again. Genius coming and going in stages, Whatever happened to the sages In the ages that I've been off? Scoff at mediocre nerves, Swerving but with no traction And curving off into distraction. No time for in-fighting It's time to band as outlaws And demand a righteous cause to Keep the rap arena safe From all these dirty monkey paws.
