ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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shayneii
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Unshakable force
Spinning the world in its hands
Whittling lives away

short one I came up with.

FallenSky
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To keep the one week rule alive, I'll judge later this week but stay assured I'll do it as masterfully as usual, and with all my heart!

Happy Haikuing!

shayneii
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To keep the one week rule alive, I'll judge later this week but stay assured I'll do it as masterfully as usual, and with all my heart!

Happy Haikuing!


I'm interested in seeing what your judging is like.

I remember judging this contest back in the day... :P
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I'm so sorry!! I knew I missed someone when I was judging! It was totally after the last judging and I missed it...

This haiku was a very basic explanation of what insanity could imply. Suicide can be one of them, but it's not usually the cause of it when people attempt, think about, or commit it. There's also the mention of using the theme in your haiku, which is a no-no. When you want to write a competent haiku, you want to describe what the theme is. Go into detail about something that is an example of the theme. Try and look at some of the ranked entries to get a better explanation of what I'm getting at here.

Hope you'll participate in the next theme! So, so sorry again!

Didn't know what parts to quote so I quoted the whole thing.
It's okay, I got a special mention didn't I? Yes I was very tired that day and I should've done something else to replace that haiku. Thanks for the advice.

Congratz to Graham for winning and to all the others for trying.

Time for my haiku. (See what I did there?)

The continuum,
in which events occur in.
Past, Present, Future.

Note: I might change it later on.
Oradnal
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Hmmm, i thought hour only had one, in NZ everyone tells my hours has one syllable, should have listened to myself not them =(.

Graham
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ou-er


When in doubt, use Dictionary.com.
thepossum
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In which events occur in,


To my mind, using the word 'in' twice made this line sound strange.
Freakenstein
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Hmmm, i thought hour only had one, in NZ everyone tells my hours has one syllable, should have listened to myself not them =(.


Yeah, I myself had a run in with this word. You can kinda hear it if you say it slowly:

OWW err.... So if you think of a person that stubbed his toe on something completely bizarre, there ya go you got yourself an example!
1337Player
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The continuum,
in which events occur in.
Past, Present, Future.

Aw crap. Noticed a grammar mistake.

The continuum,
in which events occur in.
Past, present, future.
Hmmm, i thought hour only had one, in NZ everyone tells my hours has one syllable, should have listened to myself not them =(.

That's why you should believe in yourself!
jezz
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So I'm hoping the judging occurs soon.. I'm itching to attempt another haiku xD

thisisnotanalt
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Erudite River
Trapped in the comforting flow
Leaves on Masamune


I REALLY REALLY REALLY hope the judge gets the cultural reference, because that joins the 3rd line to the 1st and 2nd conceptually.

dudeguy45
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my days are now spent
I guess I just should repent
Nah, I still got time

1337Player
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Judging should be happening soon. Good luck to everyone that submitted.

FallenSky
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Tonight might just be the judging night. I always judge past midnight because you know, I'm this unpunctual, last minute kind of guy.

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Tonight might just be the judging night. I always judge past midnight because you know, I'm this unpunctual, last minute kind of guy.


Does this mean I'll get that cookie you owe me?
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