ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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iMogwai
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From my tree I watch,
Throw fruits at those below me,
Crap, tigers can climb?!


I call it "Welcome to the Jungle". Just for the lols.

murasaki9
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The Jungle
Its a tangled mess
No one can work out of it
It's truly a trap

FallenSky
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OMG THE THREAD'S A STICKY!!
I'm so proud to have been a judge of this thread, oh, I feel a tear welling up. *sniff*

Let's see if I can make something as good as my last entry.

Maverick4
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Haiku

Rising from the ground,
Steel structures emulate the
Trees I used to know.

Congratulations on getting a sticky guys. For all those who have participated and have contributed to this threads popularity, and to all those who have judged at some point in time (I think 5 now?), you have all helped to get this contest where it is. Thanks a lot.

dudeguy45
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I've judged. I wish I could do it agin, but without having to do all that work.

Krizaz
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Yay, sticky! I did about 5 things for this, and got mentioned!

My eyes are weary
The cold night is upon me
My last breath, is death

Depressing, but I think it's dece.

FallenSky
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I've judged. I wish I could do it agin, but without having to do all that work.

Yeah, I'm waiting on my second turn right now. Hopefully, when the present judge gets tired I'll be able to rise back to the apex of my judging capabilties.
Did you know that my judgings took on average about 5 to 6 hours to do.

Maverick4
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I've judged. I wish I could do it agin, but without having to do all that work.


But the fact that (almost) every Haiku gets a critique from the judge is what makes this contest the best in my opinion. I used to hate not placing,and then not finding out what was wrong with my poem. So while judging does take awhile, its better for the contestant.

Hopefully, when the present judge gets tired I'll be able to rise back to the apex of my judging capabilties
.

Ernie is judging now, right? The order of judges was Me, Shayneii, Dudeguy, You (Fallen), and then Ernie, right? Now that I don't know the judge, I don't have as many qualms about entering.
Ernie15
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Ernie is judging now, right?


Orion and I are alternating. I judged last round, so this round he's judging.
thepinkbunny
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i like the forsest

it is deweey and warm

i like it like that
http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRZrflTto9OzqWXbM-cqVsUXewq0pkYw7RxnEUOr_bzKYJD6wVn

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i know its kick butt

waluigi
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Need to get my haiku in.

Muggy, humid air,
animals take cover as
the downpour begins.

My thinking is more of a rain-forest style jungle, although I guess that technically is the definition of a jungle.

Endscape
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Nomad

Orion and I are alternating. I judged last round, so this round he's judging


ahhhh so ill be back in 6 weeks.
GhostOfMatrix
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Herald

Orion and I are alternating. I judged last round, so this round he's judging

That makes me not want to enter because of how long it takes him to judge this. My patience runs thin when he takes so long to judge.

I suppose that I'll enter next time when Ernie is judge again.
Quirinus1
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Shepherd

As you lay easy,
Suddenly: creepy crawlers.
Longing for your blood.

Ghgt99
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Nomad

The soft shining mist
The call of the animals
The place of nature.

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