ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

5299 3122571
Maverick4
offline
Maverick4
6,800 posts
Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

  • 5,299 Replies
waluigi
offline
waluigi
1,946 posts
Shepherd

I guess I'll go ahead and submit my entry for this:


gaze ahead in time
opportunity abounds
the future looks bright

Freakenstein
offline
Freakenstein
9,504 posts
Jester

If anyone's interested in the judge position, we could work this out via Msn and come out with a judging with more than one perspective. Just drop by my profile and let me know, although all interested people should be aware that they'll miss their chance at winning merits if they're judge.


Ermm...hello!? Lol nevermind, I like to poke fun sometimes.
KingLemon
offline
KingLemon
600 posts
Nomad

Fall into the hole
And be taken to the end,
NOTHING can escape.

A quick one to get my idea down...it's a different type of Horizon

1337Player
offline
1337Player
1,766 posts
Peasant

Colors blend as one
and the sun just barely shines,
over the mountains.

Hope you liked it. The syllables on this one was a challenge for me.

Parsat
offline
Parsat
2,180 posts
Blacksmith

Many thanks for the judging, Fallen. There are quite a few cherry trees in my old neighborhood, and it was an excellent theme to write on.

As for horizons, I suppose I'll have to plumb the depths of my memory again.

Pazx
offline
Pazx
5,845 posts
Peasant

I actually came up with two haikus for this theme, this morning while getting dressed and again while in my English exam (which had nothing to do with poetry D and I have forgotten both. Heck, I even forgot the word Gloomy, "Uh... Gloopy?"

Gloomy sky so grey
Shimmering water so blue
I must look onwards

IcyIndia
offline
IcyIndia
1,344 posts
Nomad

Second haiku since third grade...

The edge of the sky,
sweeping so effortlessly
against the mountains.

Freakenstein
offline
Freakenstein
9,504 posts
Jester

Twixt together are
two vast mirrors revealing
land and sky as one

Endscape
offline
Endscape
1,182 posts
Nomad

Where Orange meets blue
To be one and start a new
Great day through and through.

Endscape
offline
Endscape
1,182 posts
Nomad

i apologize if my entry was un welcomed.... writing poetry soothes me.

samy
offline
samy
4,871 posts
Nomad

i apologize if my entry was un welcomed


Not at all, although haikus traditionally don't rhyme as a heads up, I feel like they let it slide around here though.
FallenSky
offline
FallenSky
1,813 posts
Peasant

Not at all, although haikus traditionally don't rhyme as a heads up, I feel like they let it slide around here though.

I do judge them, but they are not eligible to win the merit.

Also, I forgot to mention that some Haikus - In fact the largest number since a good while now - in the latest round haven't been judged, be it either because of their format or their...appropriateness...

Inappropriateness:
Cherry trees, cherry
trees, cherry trees, chaerry trees
Cherry make you sh*t


Please refrain from doing such Haikus please. It's not even funny; it's just utterly puerile and out of place.

Happy Haikuing!

MoonFairy
offline
MoonFairy
3,386 posts
Shepherd

Of COURSE it is Parsat. You two should go get married under the poetry tree. :P

Now, if you weren't my Uncle, I would be one of those angry Haiku-ers with a pitchfork and an angry cat.
___
This one is a double Haiku thing. I think you can enter that right?

That single color,
That you can not find elsewhere,
But it's everywhere.
The one perfect shade,
In that small window of time.
Just simply sublime.

Endscape
offline
Endscape
1,182 posts
Nomad

thank you all for clearing that up for me. i assumed i stepped into the lion's den without thinking... however im known for doing such.. and coming out unscathed.. p.s. the whole rhyming scheme was accidental as art is an expolsion poetry is like breathing.. whether long, short, consistant, slow, erratic,or controlled, ... one way or the other it will come out.

jkmadman1
offline
jkmadman1
1,066 posts
Nomad

Im bored so if i win holy crap.

You hate everything
Expand your horizons now
It will pay later.

Less than 5 minutes. whoo. 1 edit whoo. I had a snow one before but i cant remember it

Showing 2491-2505 of 5299