ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Cenere
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Despite not knowing a thing about Danish, I still did laugh.

You tried to say it out loud?

Nice judging too.
Aaaaand... title change! FLY LIKE SUPERMAN!
kacboy
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I was left out... whatev!

EnterOrion
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You tried to say it out loud?


. . . Maybe.

I was left out... whatev!

Sorry about that.
valkery
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My life is nasty
It really sucks, it is true
Michal Jackson sucks

EnterOrion
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Valkery, how is that related to the current theme?

My haiku:

Hydroelectric
The power runs in rivers
Dams produce it all

marioman327
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Veins willing to burst
All liquids at my command
Could overtake me

Teeheegirl123
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Powerful, yet calm
Water is its own master
It does as it wants

This is my entry for now. I may enter something else if any good ideas come to mind.

Yodadude53
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That was random 2 award! Yeaaaaaaaaah!!!! They should put me in the Haiku hall of fame for that one >

Kyouzou
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well here it is...

Controlling all lives
Drowning, Destroying, Killing
Everyone shall die

Ernie15
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Bard

It's pretty awkward to be the only guy to not get mentioned.

Waves as high as clouds
Crashing down on enemies
Drenching evil ways

chitown
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It's pretty awkward to be the only guy to not get mentioned.


I wasn't mentioned, but mine was terrible. Anyways, Haiku:

Waves towering above
Terror in the peoples eyes
One word tsunami
Ernie15
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One word tsunami


I think that line would be better with a colon somewhere in there. I'm not going to tell you where, but there's a specific place where it would fit perfectly.
Kyouzou
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It's pretty awkward to be the only guy to not get mentioned.


I didn't get mentioned either Then again all my haiku was doing was making fun of the topic, lol
Freakenstein
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Grace and fear inside,
Calm and deadly: everything.
Water controls all.

FloydTC
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running from my spout
I guide it into the bowl
wait thats not water

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