ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Kyouzou
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HAIKU JUDGE AUDITIONS



I thought Orion was permanent?
Cenere
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I thought Orion was permanent?

Apparently not. Since I have kindly been asked to shove my foot into my mouth (or rather asked whether I have the authority to make someone a judge) so, instead of just concluding it works, they want auditions. Hopefully Dudeguy doesn't get too interested in his ps3 again, so this thread gets locked again.
Tanjamaltija
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Fire in the sky
Dust to dust, ashes ditto -
End of the Old World?

adios194
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Red, Blue, and White.
What once was there is not!
Only embers lay!

Its meant to symbolize how the original america has been destroyed and all thats left is shit. Also this is a true story... lol.

Crab65
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Red, Blue, and White.


4 syllables

What once was there is not!


6 syllables

Add a syllable each to the first two lines and you'll qualify.
adios194
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Was Red, White, and Blue.
What once was there is not! Gone!
Only embers lay!


My new and improved... lol. Also thanks Crab65 for helping me cretique it.

adios194
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Indendiary!
It is burning in my heart.
Love is forgotten.


I like this one better.

adios194
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Incendiary!
It is burning in my heart.
Love is forgotten.

I spelled it wrong

Kyouzou
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Are you allowed to change your entry....? Anyone know who's doing the judging this time?

Axel
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Burning all day long
Mass destruction in the forests
Can kill many people

Just a try.

Crab65
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Mass destruction in the forests


8 syllables

Can kill many people


6 syllables

Subtract a syllable from each of those lines and you're good to go.
Axel
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Dang it.

Burning all day long
Mass destruction in the trees
Can kill many men

adios194
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Yes, you can change it. The rules state one entry per user. It doesn't state that you can't change you entry. I would like to replace my first one with the second.

EnterOrion
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Anyone know who's doing the judging this time?


Either me or Dudeguy. Not sure right now.

In the event that I myself am not judging, I'll enter one.

Fiery black smoke
It's growing ever darker
It must be over
Freakenstein
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Dudeguy said back a few pages that whomever was judging this round (aka you) would be judging this one, and then he and his new co-judge would do the rest.

[quote=Dudeguy45]Whoever is the judge for this round can still be judge.[/quote]

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