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sourwhatup2
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What is it?

Terza Rima is a type of poetry consisting of 10 or 11 syllable lines arranged in three-line.

Example:

Ode to the West Wind by Percy Bysshe Shelley

O wild West Wind, thou breath of Autumn's being,
Thou, from whose unseen presence the leaves dead
Are driven, like ghosts from an enchanter fleeing


So here are the rules:

~Terza Rima's must be completely Original which means no Plagiarizing.
~There can only be 1 submission per user
~The same user is not able to win twice in a row
~Even if the same user who won can't win.. doesn't mean they can't enter
~Must be submitted before the actual deadline for the contest
~It has to fit the theme

This will always last 1 week.

The deadline is February 27th and most Contests will start on the weekend.

This weeks Theme is The Desert and I am still in the process of asking for a merit to the winners.

Have fun making Terza Rima's Lol.

By the way.. I'm looking for Judges. ;D
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Kyouzou
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I also like your poem.. very much.



Why thank you, I'm glad to see I didn't screw it up this time.
sourwhatup2
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Okay thank you and I am real busy on the 6th so the judging is now on the 7th.


Fine by me. :]

@jdogg: Lol I was about to say that your 3rd line didn't rhyme.. Good job you fixed it though xD
iamnotironman
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Well there is not that many so may have to delay it longer.

sourwhatup2
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Well there is not that many so may have to delay it longer.


Well there's still 2 days left. Lol
jdoggparty
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Lol. How much are there?

sourwhatup2
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4 or 5 I think.

sourwhatup2
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1 more day left guys, please put in some poems n.n

iamnotironman
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There is only 4 entries so the bronze is first:

4th-Bronze TeeHeegirl123!
Rich man, bears gold jeweled rings, but still gets the blues
Poor man, begging for coins, got nothing to lose
Still, they wish they could be in each other's shoes

I liked how you said they want to be in each other shoes because they have a sad life.


3rd-Silver Moabarmorgamer!

The prodigal rich, squander their cash away
The poor hold steady, to survive day by day
In future, one will be the other, someday...

I liked how this was like a movie I saw but I forgot the name.

2nd-Gold Kyouzou!

Rolling in copious amounts of wealth
Controlling the lives of those with less power
Making those less fortunate tighten their belts

I really liked how the rich guy is really greedy and cares for himself only.

1st-Platinum JDOGPARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A rich family dies, a rich kid survives
A poor family survives, a poor kid dies
The kids must survive, to help others lives

I really liked how this goes back and forth even though it's kind of predictible.

Well you can ask sour to see the next theme.

Teeheegirl123
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Awwwww..... last place.
Maybe this round I'll think of something better.

Kyouzou
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Cool I got gold!

I'm sure you'll do better next time Teeheegirl

sourwhatup2
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Nice Judging. I would of picked it exactly the same.. though maybe I would of explained more about how I liked them xD

Anyways..

Next Theme: War

For some reason I just wanna pick war.. xD Don't ask.

Deadline: Next Monday, March 15th At 6PM Ag time

By now you should know all my contests end at 6pm xD
Btw, I need more people. Try and spread the word somehow x], the more people and the faster this thread builds up.. the faster You guys will be getting those merits. Keep up the good work with the poems.

sourwhatup2
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By the way, I'll be judging this next one. x]

iamnotironman
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Will I judge again?It is hard to explane,sometimes you just like one better than the other.

sourwhatup2
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Not this round . xD

This round I'm judging.. So basically we take turns.

Kyouzou
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I'll give it a shot...

Hades and Ares cackle in glee, war is near
The screams of the wounded ring through the air
One general shall visit the fabled seer


How is it?

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