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sourwhatup2
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What is it?

Terza Rima is a type of poetry consisting of 10 or 11 syllable lines arranged in three-line.

Example:

Ode to the West Wind by Percy Bysshe Shelley

O wild West Wind, thou breath of Autumn's being,
Thou, from whose unseen presence the leaves dead
Are driven, like ghosts from an enchanter fleeing


So here are the rules:

~Terza Rima's must be completely Original which means no Plagiarizing.
~There can only be 1 submission per user
~The same user is not able to win twice in a row
~Even if the same user who won can't win.. doesn't mean they can't enter
~Must be submitted before the actual deadline for the contest
~It has to fit the theme

This will always last 1 week.

The deadline is February 27th and most Contests will start on the weekend.

This weeks Theme is The Desert and I am still in the process of asking for a merit to the winners.

Have fun making Terza Rima's Lol.

By the way.. I'm looking for Judges. ;D
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sourwhatup2
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It's good.. Perfect syllables.. *cough* and I like it overall keep up the good work. Now You'll just have to wait til judging x]

Teeheegirl123
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They always tell me, "Have courage, be brave"
Underneath, they're just as scared as I am.
But I'll fight if it's my country that I'll save.

sourwhatup2
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Guys.. I need more poems if you ever want to get a merit.. And You guys most likely do right?? x] Anyways keep up the good work.. :P

WexMajor82
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Both in the trench, like brothers they were
Knee deep in the mud, both fighting the war
The rich and the poor, the maggots don't care

Freakenstein
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Guys.. I need more poems if you ever want to get a merit..


Okies! ^_^

Trenches deep, clouds choked black, and mortars shot forth,
Death will skim the boundaries for his next soul.
History is written by those who survive.
sourwhatup2
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Okies! ^_^


Thank You !

Btw.. Your last line didn't rhyme with your first.. You can fix it right? xD

Major You too.
Freakenstein
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Woah, the 1st and 3rd are rhyming stanzas? I did not catch that!

Errr....

Trenches deep, clouds choked black, and mortars shot cries,
Death will skim the boundaries for his next soul.
History; written by those that do not die.

sourwhatup2
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Woah, the 1st and 3rd are rhyming stanzas? I did not catch that!


Indeed they are xD

Good Job changing it Lol :P
marioman327
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Emotions become a sporadic affair
The Great Satan's power washes the lands with
Oceans of blood, and we don't give a care

Kyouzou
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cool poem Mario, seems a bit disjointed though with the lines 2 continuing on in three but maybe that's just me...

Parsat
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Shall I compare thee to a bloody day
When all the rivers run their courses dry:
The time when darkest forces hold their sway
Upon the earth. Men wish that they would die
A quick and painless death when retribution
Passes with a scream by their very eye.
Truly, for the wicked no restitution
Shall be found in that very last of days
Come upon us -- The Age of Revolution.

marioman327
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cool poem Mario, seems a bit disjointed though with the lines 2 continuing on in three but maybe that's just me...


Yea I know what you mean, I just got lazy
sourwhatup2
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Tanks Parsat that's exactly How I want it.. The structure of it.

sourwhatup2
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Thanks*** o_o

And Mario it's alright if you do that xD

marioman327
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Tanks Parsat that's exactly How I want it.. The structure of it.


So it can be more than 3 lines?
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