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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Salvidian
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Salvidian
4,170 posts
Farmer

I try to wait
For the metro
The snow grabs me
Throws me down

I can't stop doing it

MoonFairy
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MoonFairy
3,386 posts
Shepherd

I can't stop doing it.
It must be in my veins.
Silencing the protesters,
Throwing them in chains.

I can't let anyone know.
Don't you understand?
No one can ever see
What I have planned.

It's quite simple, really.
But this I can't disclose.
You'll have to wait and see
Until the final chapter is composed.
_____

meh. I'm trying.

Safe in the steep cliffs

EmperorPalpatine
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EmperorPalpatine
9,439 posts
Jester

Safe in the steep cliffs
Adrift in my solitude,
Amused by the way
Days seem to slip.

Seductive shadows

09philj
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09philj
2,825 posts
Jester

Seductive shadows
Always follow me
Pity they have no owners.

Why did you have to do that?

Gantic
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Gantic
11,891 posts
King

Why did you have to do that?
It was my best blue hat!
Is it 'cuz you are so fat?
Why did you? You dumb cat!

It was like a summer song

Omegap12
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1,980 posts
Shepherd

It was like a summer song
Sun-bathing
Hair bleached white
Birds singing
Then I stepped out of the tanning booth and took out my ear-buds.

The way she looked at me

StormWalker
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StormWalker
8,231 posts
Jester

The way she looked at me
as if I were some sort of filth
and the disgusted turn away
as if she cared nothing for my ilk

--
what did I just do
A few steps down the road

Riptizoid101
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Riptizoid101
6,257 posts
Farmer

A few steps down the road,
Warm brilliance behold,
Smiling faces and gentle waves,
Her skin was milky white and hair of gold,
If not her, then whom?
If not me, then who?
Affectionate wind that outlines her body;
Seemingly frivolous droplets of dew,
Evanescent,
Yet much needed,
Never relinquishing her sapphire eyes,
Thus cold hearts concede,
And all the more l'amore,
Keeping pristine until snowed,
For wonderment will always be, at least,
A few steps down the road.

The first line to poetry,

Gantic
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Gantic
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King

The first line to poetry,
like a seed to grow a tree,
from simple roots, simple words,
grow to hold up thoughts and birds.
from the ground into the sky,
go earthy things held up high.
like water to start this tree,
each line aft is artistry.

You beautiful you

Omegap12
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1,980 posts
Shepherd

You beautiful you
Who caught my heart so quickly.
You helped through everything
Even though you didnt know that
Thank you, for being so beautiful.

I cant believe this

StormWalker
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StormWalker
8,231 posts
Jester

I can't believe this.
Now you're gone, and what
beauty is there for
me to see in a
world with only a
tombstone in your name?
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What made up your mind?

Nurvana
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Nurvana
2,520 posts
Farmer

What made up your mind
I was halfway there
You said give it chance
But I never knew where

To ask if you really meant when you said
You were leaving for real, you were shedding
Your skin

Good thing I can call my heart home

Omegap12
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Omegap12
1,980 posts
Shepherd

Good thing i can call my heart home
Because mine is the one that would house me
The only place that does house me

Im a nomad,
A traveler,
A wanderer.
A home i do not own
But my heart counts enough to keep me safe from all harm.

I didnt throw the first punch, i swear
(I wanna see what that poem will be!)

Shoeminor
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Shoeminor
912 posts
Blacksmith

I didnt throw the first punch, i swear
It was the bully by the park
I promise you no mistakes
But that is why the
Shower cubicle is broken

The magic cloak of doom

Seashark001
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Seashark001
613 posts
Nomad

The magic cloak of doom,
A fabric panda in the room,
Apron of a meth cook
Hanging on my brass hook
The magic cloak of doom

She gave me much delight

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