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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Charlie506
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Nomad

Tick Tock.
Look at the clock.
8:34
I must be poor.


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Riptizoid101
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Farmer


Tick Tock.
Look at the clock.
8:34
I must be poor.

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Not how you're suppose to do it. A person gives you a line to start your poem, and then you finish it.

This is a life without purpose, devoid of meaning. I love it.
Those people with dreams. Aspirations. I rise above it.
I possess true freedom, more valuable than gold.
Yes, it is a such a privilege, a sight to behold.
Before I die, or grow old, or learn what life means,
At least I'll live one, more than what it quite seems.

You tell me what it means
MoonFairy
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Shepherd

You tell me what it means.
I'm sick of second guessing
What do you want me to know?

I don't know what you're thinking
I don't have a clue
I don't even know if I really have you

I've been losing sleep

bigjacob
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578 posts
Farmer

I've been losing sleep.
This makes sense, considering I don't need it anymore.
Not once does the feeling of drowsiness start to take hold,
never do I get the urge to just go lie down and rest.
All things considered, being turned into an immortal demon was one of the greatest things to ever happen to me, though sometimes...
I miss the feeling of having dreams.


My name is Prisoner 9541. Yours?

StormWalker
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Jester

My name is Prisoner 9541. Yours?
You don't remember? It's on your jersey.
You're 9542? You must've come in right after me!
We could form an alliance!

Do you remember anything?
From outside, where there's light?
I don't, but they say it's marvelous, and I want to see it.
You could help me, and we both could see it.
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What do you say, comrade?

EmperorPalpatine
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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

What do you say, comrade?
Shall we go to war?
Will we fight for honor,
Or is it the slaughter you adore?
Will we return in triumph,
Or will our blood be poured?
Will they flee in terror,
And return nevermore?
Will they stand and face us,
Or be crippled to the core?
But first ask yourself, comrade,
What are we fighting for?

Erase the slate of dreary tears

EmperorPalpatine
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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

[I guess I'll use up a bunch of my random scribblings]

Erase the slate of dreary tears,
Clear your memory of fears;
Drink the wine, spend the time
To find your mind is in a bind:
Sleeping soundly without a scream
Of severed secrets sealed in a seam,
So slit the curtain from the wall,
Reveal the gory scene to all.
Shine like a seashell in the sun:
With a glint of ease and a glimmer of fun
Near seas of dreams and skies of light,
But brought to ashes in the night;
Shattered and scattered, they flit away
Above the ocean of dismay.

Horizons near the endless maw

Riptizoid101
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Farmer

Horizons near endless maw,
Accompanied by sky, an open jaw,
Wishes are made; Monkey's paw,
Leaves the layman's mind in awe,
The macrocosm we know, still parturient, yet alienating,
To the subatomic unknown, ameliorating,
Though it follows a pattern, you can say it's unplanned,
Including our existence, which we have yet to barely understand

Hazy lies, foggy truths

Pieguyme
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Pieguyme
1,010 posts
Farmer

Hazy lies, foggy truths
both mean trouble
for the sleuth.
Searching a photo
black and white
Could it be?
It just might.

Man that's terrible. This is what happens when you ask a person with no artistic talent to write a poem. Anyway....

Golden seas, in the sun

EmperorPalpatine
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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Golden seas, in the sun
Shimmering bright;
A warm delight
Until the day is done.

Enbistled slumpforious grubles

OperationNilo
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3,937 posts
Shepherd

Enbistled slumpforious grubles.
These words are certainly not fictitious.
Certainly not troubadours of incoherency,
Bursting with pride, yet surreptitious.

Keep yourself alive

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

Keep Yourself Alive!
the stereo blared,
My Queen record spinning;
loud as I dared.
A blast from the past,
well, it has fared;
The grooves of old music
meant to be shared!

In the shadow of the Mushroom Cloud

Pieguyme
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Farmer

Keep yourself alive,
no one else w[/i]ill
Towards the pits of death,
do not dive
For if you fall ill,
You will see the doors of death.
So I advise you, dear traveler,
Keep yourself alive.

Mail without haste

OperationNilo
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Shepherd

A point goes to Wal for getting my Queen reference. Therefore it will be his line that I answer.

In the shadow of the mushroom cloud stood a man.
His face a spectral, pallid, ashen colour,
His features proud yet bland.

And the man sighed, and as he saw the great wreckage,
Which once had been his life.
Which was torn asunder by explosive armaments.

Explosive armaments [...]

OperationNilo
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Shepherd

Am I really that stupid?

In the shadow of the mushroom cloud stood a man.
His face a spectral, pallid, ashen colour,
His features proud yet bland.

And the man sighed as he saw the great wreckage
Which once had been his life. A collection
torn asunder by powerful explosive armaments.

(there's a very good reason behind my using the explosive armaments part, of course, I will reveal no detail about it).

Explosive armaments [...]

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