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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Graham
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Nomad

Steps lively, the bombs are here.
Eats carrotly, the bombs are here.
Poo's spritely, the bombs are here.
Repeat.

Zero plus two is three plus four minus five

CommanderDude7
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Nomad

Zero plus two is three plus four minus five
I can do math with no calculators.
I can skydive with no parachutes.
I can drive with no steering wheel.
I can read with no eyeballs.
I can do math with no calculators.

A tribute to a dead song that should stay there.

Why cant you die?!?!?

Hypermnestra
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26,390 posts
Nomad

Why can't you die?!?!?
Immortality, your curse
Fading away is your life
And dying is your cure

You've tried and tried again to live
But now you can only hope to die
You can't return this cursed gift
Your life is now your lie

Your burden is heavy, your heart as well
Your eternal fear of burning in hell
Gone forever, but now you know
That hell is on earth, and now you can't go

I take down old photos and replace them with new

Kyouzou
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Jester

I take down old photos and replace them with new
A new family built upon the shoulders of the old
Towering family trees are sent back into the past
Ancient bloodline, slowly dying, infused with life


The tear of our sorrows

MoonFairy
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3,386 posts
Shepherd

The tear of our sorrows,
Is all that we will give.
No matter how many curses and plagues,
That we try to outlive.

So much death,
So much sorrow.
What is the point,
Of looking foward to tomorrow?

We can't let you in,
Or you might be able to see.
How much pain there is,
Or all of the suffering.

So let it be known,
That we are still strong.
Even though it is false,
Even though it is wrong.

So only a small tear,
Will drop from our faces.
Only a small rip,
Tears the courage where our faith is.


Those eyes that bore into my soul

Hypermnestra
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26,390 posts
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Those eyes that bore into my soul
Were darkened without sight
Those eyes that bore in me a hole
Would haunt me for my life

Those eyes that cut into my whole
Were dark and black as coal
Those eyes that burned into my own
They took their hefty toll

Those deadened eyes that stared at me
They stole away the light
Those eyes cursed me for eternity
And left me in the night

Those eyes follow me while sleeping
And now when I'm awake
It would seem that they are creeping
To me, and so I wait

Those eyes that I once swore upon
"I swear upon her eyes."
Remind me of my broken bond
And my eternal lie

Now I lie awake, drenched with sweat
As the eyes slowly approach
Insanity has taken hold
And I show no reproach

They come for me now, do those eyes
That boil over with hate
They come for me, to take my eyes
And thus reciprocate.

Wow, I think that was one of my best poems yet!

Every day I live

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

Every day I live
I try to survive.
But this one I wasn't so lucky.
Because I forgot to switch the car to "Drive".
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Can you hear me now?

jezz
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Farmer

Can you hear me now?
I use half of my voice to speak.
And if I even go to work,
I work for half of the week.
And when you glance across the room,
You catch just half of my stare.
Check out my shadow on the wall,
There's only half of it there.
Put your hand against my chest,
And feel just half of a beat.
And watch me hop across the room,
With only one of my feet.
I need the other half of me,
I don't know how I get by,
When I can only see the world,
Through just one half of my eye.

Every news page says more of the same thing

Hypermnestra
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Nomad

Every news page says more of the same thing
"We're making progress, we're recovering."
Every news page will tell the same old tale
Never would they tell you, Uncle Sam has failed

"A murderer executed by firing squad."
But what they don't tell you, is it's all a facade
"Another oil spill, again caused by BP!"
But they never report on the harsh reality

The tabloids will tell you other peoples' mistakes
"Lohan arrested again, it's the breaks!"
But they never consider what's really important
Not celebrities or fashion or any assortment

Some might tell you about politics and such
"Tea Party v. Obama...wish them good luck!"
But only you can know what's important to you
And that's what you make it, your life as you choose

Hypermnestra
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26,390 posts
Nomad

Popsicles are very nice, made of juicy frozen ice

BlackSkullDragon
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Peasant

Popsicles are very nice, made of juicy frozen ice
Frozen like my heart,
Juicy as my life,
They always take me back.

In my narrow childhood,
My heart got frozen,
Frozen by you,
Frozen by it's owner.

Went trough all my life,
Trying to defrost it,
Using people's love,
Seeing it not working.

Now I see that popsicle,
Those hurtful memories,
Memories of my life,
And of the one you took away from me.

BlackSkullDragon
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Peasant

Sorry for the double post but I forgot to put a new first line.
The great fire in heaven

CommanderDude7
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4,689 posts
Nomad

I will get this to 40 pages!

The great fire in heaven
Rained down upon the earth
Bring destruction and death
Purifying what was corrupt
Paving the way for the next generation
A new life to rise from the ashes

My cat is evil!

jezz
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Farmer

My cat is evil!
We let her into the kitchen,
From the garden outside,
And gave the poor thing some treats,
Yet in the front porch she hides.

She re-furnished the sofas,
And stamped pawprints on our beds,
She mauled a mouse on the doorstep,
And tore our carpet to shreds!

If you read it backwards it'll make sense

wakabakawaka
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Nomad

My cat is evil
I swear she wants me dead
She wants my food, she wants my toys
But most of all, my bed

She always looks at me with evil eyes
The most sinister of stares
She might only be one foot tall
But she's as ferocious as a bear

I know she's plotting against me
Meowing about plans with what I think is a bat
One day I know I will perish
By the blood stained paws of my cat


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