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Parsat
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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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CommanderDude7
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CommanderDude7
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Nomad

A line in the sand
You cant cross it now
You ask me why?
You are not ready
Perhaps tommorrow
Dont look so down
The greatest accomplishments are never easy

The blade pierced his back

Kyouzou
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Kyouzou
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Jester

The blade pierced his back
Eyes wide with betrayal
He looked upon the traitor
And choked out his last words
"Et tu Brute?"

This world of mine...

SheWhoMustNotBeNamed
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SheWhoMustNotBeNamed
185 posts
Nomad

This world of mine,
filled with death and destruction.
This world of mine,
filled with tears and despair.
This world of mine,
filled with killing and murder,
This world of mine,
where sadness fills the air.

Yes, no, maybe so

Lintire
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Lintire
114 posts
Nomad

The blade pierced his back,
Or, was it yours?
To be betrayed by the dozen,
That's part of lore.

The blade, the blade!
What a distress,
To be betrayed by a brother,
who, under duress,

Cracked, went insane,
Fell like no other,
Stabbed you for money,
To pay for your mother.

When stabbed in the back,
Be sure to carry money,
For, while you will die,
At least you can pay for honey.

The glory had fallen

KawaiiRion
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KawaiiRion
202 posts
Nomad

The blade pierced his back,
Or, was it yours?
To be betrayed by the dozen,
That's part of lore.
The blade, the blade!
What a distress,
To be betrayed by a brother,
who, under duress,
Cracked, went insane,
Fell like no other,
Stabbed you for money,
To pay for your mother.
When stabbed in the back,
Be sure to carry money,
For, while you will die,
At least you can pay for honey

The glory had fallen,
and so did your friend.

Hypermnestra
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Hypermnestra
26,390 posts
Nomad

This world of mine...
This world of my design
Has fallen into darkness
So I think I'll flood the **** out of it

Rofl.
Destruction, devastation, current elation

EnterOrion
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EnterOrion
4,220 posts
Nomad

Destruction, devastation, current elation,
Laughing at my godly relation,
Watching as the bloodly inflation,
Waiting for eternal dam*ation.



I just shot myself in the foot

CommanderDude7
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CommanderDude7
4,689 posts
Nomad

I just shot myself in the foot
Ouch that hurt! I cant even look
Oh the pain! someone help
Chop it off! take me out of my misery
Oh wait it wasn't loaded...

CommanderDude7
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CommanderDude7
4,689 posts
Nomad

Dang I forgot

Kyouzou
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Kyouzou
5,061 posts
Jester

Dang I forgot
What's my line again?
Being an actor is...
Exhausting beyond belief
A lifetime of bloopers
Oh to be an actor...


My world

thepossum
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thepossum
3,035 posts
Nomad

My world,
Has unfurled,
To become the best,
better than the rest.
An awesome MMO.

So I herd you liek mudkipz

EnterOrion
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EnterOrion
4,220 posts
Nomad

My world
Crushed by the weight
Of a million stars
My life was too late
My soul on Mars

Lost to divinity
My world will unravel
Lost to insanity
I tread a road made of gravel

Complacency replaced with me
Paranoid life gone
Looking down a .43
Dead at the age of 23

The end just for the lulz, couldn't help myself.

Abso-freakin-lutely wonderful

CommanderDude7
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CommanderDude7
4,689 posts
Nomad

Abso-freakin-lutely wonderful
Looking at the sky so blue
The clouds so white
Wondering why everyone's got to fight
Couldn't we lay down our guns?
Pick up the pen instead of a sword
Looking around cant understand
Why we would waste time fighting
When we already got so much

The cry of betryal and anguish

slayguy8
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slayguy8
718 posts
Peasant

The cry of betryal and anguish,
That feeling of getting stabbed.
The sound of false trust,
Has hurt us all before.

The pain is all too sightly,
Your heart bleeds.
Of turst thats lost,
The brutal ways.

Next line:

Your life so sad

wakabakawaka
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wakabakawaka
51 posts
Nomad

Your life so sad
And grammer so bad
But please don't get mad
For I'm just teasing you lad.



Next Line: The faded lines

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