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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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CommanderDude7
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Not if I quick write one with it!

This is only the beginning
Of that game that we call life
Is what my dad told to me
Look ahead never back
Confidence is key
Especially in the military
He rambles on with his advice
Imparting gem after gem
Each one relevant and wise
Yet each getting more and more odd
Perhaps its time to call the retirement house
The wolf laugh with unrestrained glee

MoonFairy
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GAH! YOU.... YOU.... GAHHH!


The wolf laughs with unrestrained glee,
as he pounces on his prey,
killing it instantly.
Biting into the flesh of the deer,
He rears his head back,
And howls with a sneer.
Now he runs through the length of the forest,
And he runs into a small field.
Where he finds a very small girl,
Oh, what a deal!
The girl walks up to him,
And he looks back with a glare.
She reaches out to touch him,
And his nostrils flare.
Another human enters the field,
He becomes very tense,
The human screams and runs away,
Now this doesn't make sense.
Why did the human leave the girl?
Why didn't she follow the man?
It seems the girl has nowhere to go.
Now the wolf starts to make a plan.
He'll keep the girl,
Since the man, she didn't follow.
He'll raise her in his new pack of two,
Now his heart won't be so hollow.
So he walks back to the forest,
And the little girl is right beside him.
He walks into a large cave,
Where the humans won't be able to find them.
The wolf raises the girl as his own,
And the girl begins to learn.
She knows every part of the forest,
Every tree, every path, every fern.
She grows older and so does he.
Now the girl goes out alone.
He is not there to notice that,
Humans now know about his home.
One day the girl leaves,
And she never comes back.
The wolf now has to live alone
Now love ,again, he lacks.
____________
I know I have to be ninja'd. >,>

Those dark blue eyes

IcyIndia
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Well, if you're still here, I'll write the next one

The wolf laughs with unrestrained glee
At the sheep it knows it will slay
The helpless lamb cries out a plea
And the wolf begins to bay
The moon howls back, a lonely tune
The wolf settles into his snack
But if only his stomach
had enough room
He'd be able to finish the task.

The King lays down his pearly crown

IcyIndia
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Those dark blue eyes
Stare back at me
What are you thinking, I wonder?
You seem to have traveled
to Paris and back
To Tokyo, and beyond
while sitting in a room
with thousands of words
reading through universes, abroad.
So, what areyou thinking?
Are you thinking of me?
Are you thinking of you?
I will never know.
But I do know this- you are who you need to be.

Reton8
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King

The King lays down his pearly crown.
To fix his hair with a golden brush.
One hundred strokes through locks of flowing brown.
To keep his hair shining, straight, and lush.

The peasant needs a new barn door.
But, selling crops won't cover the cost.
The crown is left vulnerable on the floor.
One barn door gained and one crown is lost.

There is a lesson to be learned.
Before you toss and brush your flowing locks.
Put your crown in a safe place.
Or you gonna get burned (sukcaaaa!)

I'd prefer an apple over an orange.

CommanderDude7
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Id prefer an apple over an orange
And a cow over a horse
Somethings are just meant to be however
So I am left with an orange and a horse
I dont let that get me down so I make
Some juice and a bottle of glue
He looks to the west

waluigi
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He looks to the west
he's completed his quest
to the other coast of this land
what a tough one it was
over mountains and desert
just to get to the desilite place

where does he go now?
there is nothing here
drawn by false claim of profit
perhaps he'll set down
inhabit this place
and become what nobody wants
a hermit.

almost in reach

kingryan
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Farmer

You were almost in reach,
But you had other ideas.
They wrenched us apart.

I sneeze, but you don't hear.

Oh the things I tried to teach,
Love of smiles turned to hate of sneers.
You put an iron-on patch to the hole in your heart.

I trip, but you look away.

I watch the sun rise on an empty beach.
As actions and words confirm my darkest fears.
And I wonder still, where did it start.

I take your hand, but you pull away.

You never hear the words of my speech,
I dislike the clunking between these gears;
But along with my pride, the clutch did depart.

I call your name, but you stuff your fingers in your ears and run away...leaving me with two icecream cones that are slowly melting down my arms.

Oh gravity, thou art a heartless cow

IcyIndia
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Oh gravity, thou art a heartless cow
To not let us float on breaths of air
We could hover
controlled only by weightless lines
that connect us to the earth
Or we might fly free, lost within our atmosphere
With no weight, there is no here.
But with no weight, there will be no fear.

Without fear, life will be wonderful
We will whiz past all obstacles
All life-floats
and stay in space, without a care
We will never see anything else
just clouds and stars and air

But we will have no-one to converse with
there will be nothing to see
Nothing to bring us back
to earth as we know it
And we will forget everything that we consist of
be it
love
or grief
or happiness
or even contentment
We will forget it all.

Oh gravity, thou art a heartless cow
but it is better to have no heart at all
to have one be broken
For losing emotion hides all weakness.
But then, where is the will to live?
With no gravity to push against you, you would not feel the need to
stand.
With no heart to help you love, would it be your desire
to hold love on your own two shoulders?

There can never be a perfect fire
It will warm and illuminate
but it can also burn and ravage
beautiful lands that are now so desolate
So be careful of your decisions,
or you may take the bait.

Calling forth the silver waves of light

waluigi
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Shepherd

Calling forth the silver waves of light
bringing them in,
blasting them out a thousand times stronger
the physic wars have begun

constant pain driving through
the soldiers' heads
and all of them are living
yet at the same time dying
their minds pushed to the max

no one's left with stable minds
from this war worse than all
insanity from the pain
affecting more and more
till there's no one left

The war is over now
no sane men left
except a lucky few
the world is now a mess
from the physic war

bittersweet victory

IcyIndia
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A bittersweet victory
Though I managed to push you away
And though you seem to like to say that way
I'm pulling you back

You seem oblivious to my feelings
It's strange
How I care so much for you
yet you don't even look twice.
I wish we could talk
But
You would only laugh
And I wouldn't say a word
just walk out.

You're too popular.
You've got your gang of girls to laugh with
But I have no such thing.

I wish I never had to push you away
But that was your choice, not mine
So, no thank you.

It's so hard
Seeing you every day
But
I guess I just have to deal
With seeing you
So happy
Not spending a second
Thinking of me

So this victory
Is bittersweet.
I pushed you away
But I want you to stay
And, it is so difficult
to see you every day
Happy, without
Me.

The liquid pendant

Oblivior
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The liquid pendant.
That you keep ever so near,
It shines in the night,
So very clear.

Whenever I see it on your neck,
It makes me think,
Why I ever thought,
That this would all be for naught.

Though we all have our cries and laughs,
This pain I feel, it lashes out so very far,
It makes me feel, as if to cough,
I'll look for you, near or far.

The cry of the maiden

IcyIndia
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The cry of the maiden
Tears at the heartstrings
Of all knights, princes and kings
But
If only they knew
That this maiden
Is just too lazy
And stupid
And selfish
To save herself.


Sprinting across the earth

DeusExus
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The cry of the maiden
Tears at the heartstrings
Of all knights, princes and kings
But
If only they knew
That this maiden
Is just too lazy
And stupid
And selfish
To save herself.
Sprinting across the earth,
Wresting empires' grip

jezz
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DeusExus, you have the wrong idea.. Have you not read the OP of this thread? You don't copy other's poems, you write your own starting with the first line the previous person has supplied in bold.

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