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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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slayguy8
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718 posts
Peasant

Give peace a chance
dont toss it aside
like harmony
its needed

in ths world
so cruel and unfair
unlike love and care
peace is needed

all throughout
this place
of horror
no doubt

the world needs it
but maybe for you can help
and me too
to be civilized

plus nice although
its much like the bird
it will come
and it will go


NAILED IT!!!

my own life without you

Faunbard
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650 posts
Nomad

my own life without you
I feel light as feather
My own life without you
Althogh i will wither

The greatest man of all the earth

slayguy8
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718 posts
Peasant

The greatest man on earth
is like you and me
they arnt super strong
and they can see

the world differently
no not butterflies
but the horror in disguise
its the realize

The money isnt worth the price i paid

crazyrussian97
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256 posts
Shepherd

The greatest man of all the earth
Is not he of great height and girth,
But rather he of golden heart,
In which the malice has no part.

His arms may be weak, and he may lack reknown,
Yet he'll pick you up when the others kick you down.
He'll never slander you with lies behind your back,
But rather he'll defend you from any such attack.

He might be old and frail, hardly able to stand,
But he'll crawl a thousand miles to lend a needed hand.
The greatest man of all the earth will be the fastest friend
One that holds up all the world until the very end.

Gunshots break the night's silence.

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

Gunshots break the nights silence
first a few, then a war
a battle has begun

bullets flying, men are dying
man killing man
chaos is all around.

The battle ends, bodies all around
river running red with blood
the price of war.

consumed by light

slayguy8
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slayguy8
718 posts
Peasant

consumed by light
darkness needed
light is blinding
nearly life talking

breath lost
freezing me in fear
i strive for darkness
its eating me alive

cant break through it
like glass
killing me
gone


the money isnt worth the price i paid
IcyIndia
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IcyIndia
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Nomad

The money isn't worth the price I paid
These bills are grey and crinkled
They feel soft, like peach fuzz.
The green mint note isn't nearly so sharp
And I think it's going to rip

Come, Waiter, and serve me my fresh green notes,
crisp, smooth, and perfect for my wallet
I'll give you my old bills as payment
Is that worth it? No? Well, how about you call it.

I thank you profusely
for currently you give me currency
of every kindâ" Euros, Francs, Dollars, Yen, Pounds.
Even in coins.
Clink, Clink, Clink.
These noises replace the sound of water dripping into the sink.
Instead of hearing the wind I hear paper rubbing together
Instead of hearing voices I hear a rush of metal, like a waterfall
Instead of hearing life,
I hear money
But, maybe I do hear life.
Now, money is my life.

When I come

slayguy8
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slayguy8
718 posts
Peasant

[/b]When I come
no more suffering
peace will come
to all the lands

tears will stop
same with blood
no hunger
just love

[i]The trees sway[/i}

waluigi
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Shepherd

The trees sway
in the cool breeze
that once, I had enjoyed,
but its not the same
now that your gone

It used to be that
everywhere I turned,
you were there guide me
but now that your gone,
things are not the same.

Your presence can still be felt
all throughout my life
and every time I go somewhere
I feel you are there
with me

But now you are gone
and it still feels you are here
but you are not
and things will never be the same
without you here.

the fear of death

jezz
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jezz
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Farmer

The fear of death,
The feeling never leaves you at all,
The whole ride to the hospital,
Close your mouth, shut your eyes tight and crawl.

Closing in on every side,
Patients in their prison, they cry,
You never did shut your ears to the sound,
You always kept both ears to the ground.

It didn't used to hurt before,
But you couldn't say that any more.
Got the memory of white light, gripping tight,
Forced to sleep, don't let the mad men bite.

They used a needle for the pain.
Bore a hole for the centre of your brain.
Crawling back down the corridor, to the door,
Open for the longing that you don't ignore.

Quiet for the car ride home,
You're doing better on your own.
Cross your heart and hope you don't fall,
You left your fear of death at the hospital.

Hiding in my safe place, hiding with my eyes shut

IcyIndia
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IcyIndia
1,344 posts
Nomad

Hiding in my safe place, hiding with my eyes shut
no one can see me
I almost hear counting, but there is only silence
I know this isn't a game, but
I feel like smiling
The memories of running, of laughing
barely an echo in my mind

Behind my eyelids I see flashing lights
But it's hard to know if they're really there.
I hear the wind
feel the air on my skin

All is quiet.
This is the place
that I know
Where I am not scared
No one is hunting me
I am safe
I am quiet
I am at peace.

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

Uh, Where is the next first line? O>O

CommanderDude7
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4,689 posts
Nomad

I got one.
This is only the beginning

IcyIndia
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IcyIndia
1,344 posts
Nomad

I'm sorry! I was so into mine I totally forgot.

MoonFairy
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MoonFairy
3,386 posts
Shepherd

Well, if you write one now, I think it should override Commanders lol.
Please make it a good first line so that way I can try to write one!

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