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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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waluigi
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sprinting across the Earth
the light travels
banishing darkness
from every place
everywhere there is light

But the hours pass
and darkness again
takes advantage
in the ever long battle
for control of the world.

a low rumble

CommanderDude7
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A low rumble
Fills the air
Guttural and primal
It cuts through the air
Like an arrow in flight
The growl of the wolf
Freezes its prey
Leaping, grabbing, biting, killing
The victory howl tears through the air
And the victor takes the spoils
Light sparkling off a flower

IcyIndia
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Light sparking off a flower
Like a star, never shinier
A glossed view of
what you see through a magnifying glass.

When life starts anew
This light will last
through universes
Like a ship's mast
the tallest thing for miles
threatened by storms
and turbulent smiles
that wish to compete
against the brightness of this light

Never stop flashing
Shine forever, yet without time.
Grow to be a lighthouse
Help those ships land safely
with their masts higher than anything
You are an all-powerful being
So create good.

IcyIndia
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Oops I forgot the next line.
Here it is:

From the watchtower, a bird soars

FallenSky
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From a watchtower, a bird soars
Proficiently flapping its vigorous wings
As a newborn's first cry in life
A vivid speck on a merciful sky

From a watchtower, a man falls
Through glimpses of his life
Coursing to the very ground
That give him an earnest chance

From a watchtower, a glance peers
Seeing afar what was so near
And without moving, the watcher travels
To lands of hopes woven with dreams

The skeletal Autumn trees

MoonFairy
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The skeletal Autumn trees,
Have lost their bright green leaves.
Having turned shades of brown, red and gold,
The trees are now turning old.
While they wait for the snow to stop
Their limbs begin to droop,
Their friends begin to drop.
Now spring is around the bend,
New seeds that the older ones send.
Those skeletal Autumn trees,
Have lasted out the cold.
Now it is time for the younger ones,
To become the ones so old.

Plastic dolls become real

IcyIndia
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Plastic dolls become real
Not just a figment of my mind
Floating serenely through the winds
Aimlessly they shift through reality
They are silent through the din
They exist only through brevity
Though they seek only in
Vague words: the temperament of bondage
Whether trapped, or given a place
for safety, or a lifeline
or out of rage
They do not know.

Their new frame is a gift,
and they are glad.
Do they want boundaries?
Or do they want freedom?
Now, they look truly sad,
tired, weary of this flying.
If only they could rest.


Your fiery soul

Oblivior
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Your fiery soul.
It roars with flames
To you, life is not merely a game
This is reality, in which you must succeed.

Many traits, are quite abundant in you,
Courage
Strength
Bravery
Valor
And willpower, that goes on for eons
What a person wouldn't give, to be like you
He who never gives up, no matter what the odds.

The whispers of the ocean

IcyIndia
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The whispers of the ocean
Seem to echo on forever.
They rebound delightfully
Against the astounding amount
Of gentle winds
That can turn fierce
And deadly
In their poisonous wake.

These whispers
turn into crashes,
pounding relentlessly,
growing steadily,
pulling everything in reach
toward its ever-hungering belly.

There, it may scratch its rough fingers
against whatever it finds,
and dissolve everything
that it has consumed.


These headphones on my head

MoonFairy
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The whispers of the ocean,
Calm my fiery mind.
Anger at the world,
Is lost in its soft tides.
Throw yourself,
Into this world of peace.
Refreshment from the rest of the Earth,
To say in the least.
Swim through the soft waves,
And relax as you float.
You are on your own,
Using yourself as your boat.
Let the ocean guide you,
Let it take you away.
It will keep you from the land,
It will keep your rage at bay.
____

Can't move, Can't think.

IcyIndia
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I hate it when that happens.

I just won't post a next line on this one.

Can't move, can't think.
I can't even blink.
They're chasing me.
They're watching my every move,
but I need to get out, fast.
There isn't any time to lose,
And sprinting just isn't fast enough.

There's the door.
I know it's unlocked
I run outside with a roar
Escaping just rocks.
I've still got to run
The door didn't lock behind me.
I'll go hide behind that dumpster.
This isn't very much fun.
Oh, look! A key!
And there's a door.
I unlock the door
And struggle to turn the doorknob before
My captors find me again
Behind the door
is a storage room that has no doors
besides the one I just went through.
Locking it behind me, I feel
like I have just discovered
a den.

IcyIndia
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And the next line is:

These headphones on my head

It was just on the last page.

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

These headphones on my head,
Keep out the rest of the world,
Till everyone else thinks I'm dead.

I keep them in all day,
So I don't have to hear,
All the things that they say.
It is simply better this way.

It's just me and my music.
My wall of music.
It keeps me alive,
It is my heartbeat.
I can't live without it,
It is what keeps me on my feet.

I can face any day,
With these headphones on my head.
There is nothing to worry about,
Nothing to fill me with dread.

Maybe someday I can face the world,
Without my music in my ears.
But I'm fine for now,
I am just living in fear.
___

The rope around my neck is tightening

IcyIndia
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The rope around my neck is tightening
slowly, but surely,
there is more strength in its binding
I don't know if I can do this.
Just another life being sucked into Death's grip
And a thousand souls being ripped to shreds
Is it really worth it?

Standing here,
on a wobbly crate,
I am able to see with clarity
my life, every single second.
And I ask myself,
Is this really great?
To leave this reality
and enter another,
Pulling everyone else
halfway through the void
with me.

The heater is broken

Parsat
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Just a note saying that the next issue of the First Line Digest has been posted! (finally)

The heater is broken
And with it much dignity:
To freeze in California
Is to be at sixty-one degrees.

We will not grow weary

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