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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Hypermnestra
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Sitting in the park, eating a bagle.
What's a "bagle"? Is it like a "beagle"?
Is it a made-up word, like "wihagle"?
(Wihagle: A wig-wearing bald eagle).

What's a "bagle"!? I simply must know this!
I'll pull out my hair and bite all my nails
until you tell me what a "bagle" is!
Is it possibly a bat with three tails?!

Oh, the humanity! What is this word!?
What's a "bagle"?! A bag for men named "Lee"?
Or is it a blue-and-red spotted bird?
WHAT IS A "BAGLE"?! The insanity!

Oh! I googled "bagle" and it did say
that "bagle" was a bad computer worm
that affects all of Windows; you don't say?
But why would you eat a computer germ?

A new anomaly has arisen.
What's a "computer worm"?! Why'd you eat it?
No! All these words have become my prison.
Evil dictionary...I can't cheat it.

Google says a "computer worm" is a
self-replicating malware compu-
ter program. This makes no sense, I daresay!
The search for words is eternal, curse you!

WHAT IS A "BAGLE"?! It can't be a worm!
But did you mean "bagel"? A round pastry?
Well, in that case, you have something to learn.
Remember; the "l" comes after the "e".

Lol.
Okay, so...

Snug tight in a snowdrift, sleeping away

IcyIndia
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Snug tight in a snowdrift, sleeping away,
A snowflake rests, keeping warmth at bay.
Warmth would be its downfall,
Destroying what it lives in,
Destroying its hopes, its dreams,
and all that it believes in.

My back is against a mattress

DeadlyVelociraptor
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my back is against a mattress
blood dripping everywhere, I look like a carcass
shot up chest, paralyzed body
the stench is of agony, the ground muddy
a medic applies pain-killers, to all those that are nearly dead
my back against a mattress, sitting on a bed

I know that one was short...

why does it hurt?

FallenSky
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Why does it hurt?
When I look back
On the hands waved
And the knees scrapped
This history sticks to your skin
Like as much flies sucking you dry

Why does it hurt?
When I peer forward
Apprehending more or less
The doldrums to come
Like foreshown deaths pounding
The thick nails of deception

Why does it hurt?
When I stare at the moment
In between those sickles
That are past and future
Today's the day to be alive
Not tomorrow nor yesterday

Why does it hurt?
When I look at the clock...

Short little one, pretty visceral and quicky writen.

A speck of moon in her glasses

IcyIndia
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A speck of moon in her glasses,
Drawing my attention from
The land that quickly passes
By, and I am compelled to focus
on her.

There are shadows that darken
everything around us,
but still she seems to shine,
pulling my gaze into the
depths of her eyes.
I am home.

Shards of glass on the floor

DeadlyVelociraptor
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shards of glass on the floor
people running like a crazy boar
cause they flee from danger
for their death is major
it shall happen no matter what
like insects caught by a bat
I shout for them to stop in place
after all this ain't no race
this is simply war
war and nothing more
they put the people in a truck
in an operation that is black
taking them as hostages for ransom
oh this war ain't no handsome
for it kills with no meaning
kills every being
with corrupted operations
target at destroying nations

a 1000 fake eyes look at me

slayguy8
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A 1000 fake eyes look at me
gleaming unbreathlessly
staring into my soul
knowing who i truly am

not human
nor animal
just spirit
then they dissipate

all normal
now human
striving
thinking
existing

The end is now truly upon us

DeadlyVelociraptor
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The end is now truly upon us
a 1000 bombers in the midnight skies
bringing down split atoms of death
another explosion cutting your breath
first comes the explosion, thundering aloud
then comes radiation, glowing around
then comes the fire, melting bodies and skin
a tool of destruction invented by a mind that is keen
then comes the silence, nothing is heard
the destruction is over, in the sky a bird
bringing the message of life to the wasteland
after the horrible way it was handled

war comes now, not later

slayguy8
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War comes now, not later
declared today
fighting not tomorrow
a one day war

all day
all night
many shots
few deaths

over nothing
yet everything
no winner no loser
War is nothing

Then so is live



If the walls could talk

DeadlyVelociraptor
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if the walls could talk
they would only mock
keeping me inside
holding me in it's bind
it would annoy me and close me
it would narrow down, it would almost destroy me
with claustrophobia that I cannot think about
shadows in darkness would go around in a large amount
and scare 'till all my bones chill
when walls talk it ain't no thrill

too much time to be spared

crazyrussian97
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I haven't written anything in a while, so please pardon the quality of this poem. I tried to do it in terza rima, don't think it came out that well though.

"Too much time to be spared",
The cry of lazy youth,
Who age has not yet impaired.

"I search the world for truth",
They say for they know not its pain,
Which would deter any sleuth.

"Ah, how pleasant is the rain",
For their bones do not yet ache
From a damp incited strain.

"I feel so energized, awake!"
They say before they seize the day
To see what fortune they can make.

They know not how age will betray,
For with time will come weakness, death, and decay.

Is Death a workaholic?

slayguy8
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Is Death a workaholic?
Can Chuck Norris round-house kick you to mars?
Is Nascar really a sport?
Yes or no I'm asking you

The answers are all the same
but the first one Death will kill you if you know his name
Hey look its Steve
But its really death

Bye world
There be nothing left

The water calm then suddenly not[i]

DeadlyVelociraptor
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the water calm then suddenly not
the water is cold then it is hot
change appears in such a quick instant
the water seems like a complete mutant
when it changes it's temperture it's calmness and form
as you shower in your lousy little dorm
as you cook yourself dinner, as you put ice in tea
it's weird and it certainly confuses me
because it ain't no metal and it maybe a gas
but in it's liquid form it is such a mess
almost un-controllable, only a bit
as the water gathers from the deep pit
it spills and it has waves going about
confusing me at terrible amounts
though that is only if you don't look at it simply
you may try not to think about it deeply
and see it so simple
like it doesn't ripple
when you move it un-calms and that's just a fact
with simple-ness you shall make a pact
to stop looking at it weirdly and think it is calm
and grip hardly as it sleeps from your palm
that's a different way after all
look at a thrift store instead of a mall
and the water will stay calm, you'll have no doubt
that you just threw all your deepness out

stuck in this maze that is completely un-solvable

aknerd
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Stuck in this maze that is completely un-solvable
Amok I run, my cries ever growing audible
Struck a wall, lights go dim, the end not detectable
Muck fills the maze, my body goes unmovable
Luck leaves my life, my days never laughable
Chuck out all hope, my life so very perishable

She said she saw seven skulls

DeadlyVelociraptor
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she said she saw seven skulls
off away in the island of mull
she hiked through the snow and found them laid
they looked weird, artificially made
she brought them back to the lab, to examine them closely
she examined it a lot, she found nothing mostly
then she found a small chip red and blue
she then understood, she then knew
what the skulls were, from where they came
she remembered a place, she remembered a name
of a planet far away, of a different race
she knew it came from outer space

space is too wide for me

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