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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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slayguy8
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Peasant

Space is too wide for me
but it never ends
so does it ever start?
just black

plain nothingness
but all too real
can you feel it?
can you see it?

answer-less questions


Money is not what you seek
[b]

DeadlyVelociraptor
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money is not what you seek
it comes and goes as you blink
it never helps, never remains
you feel you need it like a lion and his mane
it's addictive, a bad drug
people steal and mug
cause they need more, they are addicted
my words are always contradicted
because the addiction doesn't go away
for more it always makes you pray
it makes corruption, it makes war
so throw your money out the door

an inconceivable complication

slayguy8
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Peasant

An inconceivable complication
some one told me
i just became puzzled you see
so big of words

and now a poem
about those words
meaning unknown

The sun slowly sets

DeadlyVelociraptor
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the sun slowly sets
over the stadium where play the mets
people around NY going to sleep
though it all ends with a large "beep"
then parties start, he night full of lights
everybody forgots about life and rights
and goes with the rhythm of urban
all around the world from mull to Durban
from tokyo to seattle
never a battle
just fun and joy
for girl and boy
then rises the sun
an end to the run
business people walking
instead of dance there is talking
for the urban cycle of life
that never makes you strife

rhymes are not alliteration

slayguy8
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Peasant

rhymes are not alliteration
the are different you see
now you ask how can that be
i will show thee

Rhymes
they take more time
they make a chime
they arnt a crime

alliteration
they sing swiftly
cool quick quiet
different dandy

there is the differences you see
they both are reality
they true fully tell
less little lies

Drowned in your own sorrows

DeadlyVelociraptor
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drowned in your own sorrows
never waking up for tommorow
your depression itself killed you
you can now never re-do
what you tried to do with your life
but didn't go well, now you strife
and drown yourself in your own sorrows
you are in too deep a burrow

sorry that was short

a bold Italian linking an image pictured by a quotation

slayguy8
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A bold italian linking an image pictured by a quoataion
too many actions at once
wait am i looking at here
i wonder so much

is it a picture
or a link
or words?
no one can think

i know what it all is
its a new armor games button
putting all buttons into one
so much fun

The rain falling from the darkened sky
[i][b]
Aurialis
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The rain falling from the darkened sky,
opened up and brought forth the eye,
of the one who protects both the earth,
and every soul that she does birth.


The man leaned against the weathered wall -

DeadlyVelociraptor
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the man leaned against the wall
there was nothing, situation was dull
awaiting something, something un-clear
maybe for his son, maybe for his dear
maybe for nothing, just leaning against the wall
worrying about nothing, nothing at all
maybe worried about everything, his life a mess
like a framed politician in a news press
maybe it's poetic, a metaphor perhaps
for simply "leaning against the wall and stomping on the maps"
maybe his just leaning, no explanation required
maybe this situation makes me tired

and that's why I can't finish this poem. Because I am tired.

I'm so tired it makes fall down

DeadlyVelociraptor
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*makes me

waluigi
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I'm so tired it makes me fall down
I'm exhausted of all energy
So now I must hurry to my bed
before I fall asle...


biter days of biter cold

Aurialis
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Bitter days of bitter cold,
sunk deep within bones so old.
With a shiver and a shake,
forgotten bones did awake.
A man ****ed not here nor there,
From his corpse, his soul won't tear.
Thus he wanders this world alone,
Never to see that he has sown.


It was a day like any other -

slayguy8
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Peasant

it was a day like any other
it was to change soon enough
the wind picked up
the rain soon fell

but that was the day
that no body died
no tears where shed
no sorrow among

this day was different
not like the rest
no on died
no one cried

no sorrows among
no sickness was spread
the blind could now see
this was a day like no other

the flag in the wind

MoonFairy
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Slayguy, that sounds like a song i know... I forgot the name though...

The flag in the wind,
Tossed about
Abused by the air
But shines for all to see.
To say,
We were here first!
Or
This is my castle!
Pride is what keeps it flying.
Not the wind.
Even when it is folded on a coffin,
Pride, is the message it sends.

_____

That is one crappy poem. But hey. thats okay.

OHSHIITAKE A HIT AND RUN
have fun with that one. :P

IcyIndia
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OHSHIITAKE A HIT AND RUN
Take a hit
Get that mushroom
And run, because the cops are gonna
get you

Get you
and all your friends
and your life
and your little dog, too.

So take a hit
Do your mushrooms
And run.

________

Note that the above information is taken from books I've read, not my life.

My stomach twists, nauseated

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