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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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CommanderDude7
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Nomad

One match, One score, One goal
One game to win it all
The roar of the crowd
The predictions of the octopus
Rush around inside my head
I rush to the ball, my heart pounding
I kick with the hopes of a nation
With unseen speed it curves into the corner
GOAL!
The bell is broken

Ernie15
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13,344 posts
Bard

The bell is broken
Somebody needs to fix it
Cuz it ain't clangin'

Insane in the Membrane

slayguy8
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slayguy8
718 posts
Peasant

Insane in the Membrane
Crazy in the Core
Kookie in the cranium
Lets look whats in store

As you seek there potential
Of insainly things
not knowing what is next
In there heads galore



As i walk these lands alone

TackyCrazyTNT
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1,936 posts
Peasant

As I walk these lands alone,
I think of all the things I've lost,
Wandering through the empty woods,
For all the values I have sought.
I could have stayed at home,
And lived, happy with my friends,
But I make my way in solitude,
To my life's sad end.

Murky waters

kingjac11
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2,597 posts
Nomad

Murky waters
As I wade through these murky waters,
My heart fills with sorrow,
The other side just keeps moving further,
I cant get across.

There's Something in these waters,
These horrible murky waters,
I can feel brushing past,
And pulling me in.

If I was a rockstar

nemo12
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nemo12
723 posts
Nomad

If I was a rockstar,
I would rock near and far.
Energize people all over the world
Millions of my records to be sold.

[b]My world revolves around you[b]

iMogwai
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iMogwai
2,027 posts
Peasant

My world revolves around you,
And without you I would surely perish,
You brighten my day and make me feel renewed,
And you're the cause of everything I cherish.

The day gets darker when you go away,
And when you come back, a new day has begun,
And I enjoy it while it lasts, for I know you can't stay,
You've got other places to shine on, because you are the sun.


Next line:
Is that a kangaroo?

nemo12
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nemo12
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Nomad

Is that a kangaroo?
Or is that my big yellow shoe?
Yet again, it kicked me in the knee
Is it real, what I see?

Ive lost the will to go on

GlimmeringStars
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95 posts
Nomad

I've lost the will to go on,
Not going to push through this pain,
Not going to take all of this again,
No energy left, no thoughts in my brain.
I'll leave it now, resting this strain.
Only a fool wouldn't leave but remain.

That's normally not the way I write but I just went with it.

Walking around alone

Paarfam
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Paarfam
1,558 posts
Nomad

I've lost the will to go on,
Not going to push through this pain,
Not going to take all of this again,
No energy left, no thoughts in my brain.
I'll leave it now, resting this strain.
Only a fool wouldn't leave but remain.
Walking around alone.

Not my best but...

Left to be owned
By
You

GlimmeringStars
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GlimmeringStars
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Nomad

I'm confused, why did you just post mine again? ._.

Paarfam
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Nomad

@GlimmeringStars
I thought your poem could've used an additional statement.

GlimmeringStars
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GlimmeringStars
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Nomad

Adding on the last line, which I posted for the next line makes the poem seem worse than it is, because it is pretty rubbish.
I'd prefer if you didn't post around my poems without asking me either.

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

That is still considered plagiarism Paarfam. Just make sure you don't do it again.

So I'll use the walking around alone line as it wasn't used.

Walking around alone
in this dark maze of
corridors and passage-
ways. But am I alone?

A creak from behind me
I whirl around...
nothing there, is there
am I hallucinating?

The creaks grow louder
increasingly common
panic strikes, I sprint
ahead trying to escape.

Finally, a light at the
end of a passageway
I'm free! just a few more
steps and this nightmare's d....

In the end, you can never escape

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

In the end, you can never escape
The maze of lies that ensnare,
The false net that you built,
All the forgery that you share.
In the end, you'll be caught
In your own spider's thread,
And tangled and broken,
You'll wish you were dead.

That was bad, sorry. :/

If only

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